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I was never a follower anyway a big fan of the matrix; my heads loose like a few screws you know Suggest right I go left. The first I ever witnessed man evolving into something else I would tell you what but I can't pronounce the word. Theres a machine lodged in the moon on the other half whispers of atlantis exscape the through sound waves They blamed it all on mental illness truthfully maybe it is, or maybe they were just grinning for nothing the day it arrived. They call them screaming folks on the corner some of us call them crazy depending on the color their blasting prophets off their sqaure in the new millinium, as for me I'm still searching screaming out in the night like a mother-less animal trying not to become prey to no man keeping the scriptures close to my heart like they will the sword as soon as some claims he will return; like a thief in the night Hope I won't be stealing that night out of the front door hands filled with valuables not ever knowing the owners will never return Sorry for getting religous on you, acting out what they want me to be The reasons for all the mind f---ing ya dig and all the incouraged words of suicide Life is wonderful and free Dude I got hooked on the episodes of schizafrania like a television now I need it to live like a hit from the pipe NO, NO I'm drug free never was for peer pressure I use to watch my favorite aunts suck up the gothic lines and leave and mentally able to push away in the ladder years Their playing politics with our Christ placing him at the door of prascastination meaning; no one wants the truth of his coming to much money involved, to much sin un-resolved and everyone could be the prophecy but you Your just always the victim.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/19/2010 9:17:00 PM
From one iconoclast to another, I can relate. Great thought provoking poem! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/19/2010 5:11:00 PM
wow certainly a lot to take in with your words!..niice job i like this!
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Date: 8/14/2010 10:59:00 AM
I agree with procrastination. So many never call on Jesus 'til they're gasping their last breath. Enjoyed. Dave
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:51:00 PM
Hm youre poems, Put me in a state of mind where i dream, and think allot, very descriptive and good use of imagery. I can tell you put allot of thought into yur words. i like it its diffrent(: and thankyou you two.(: -manda
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Date: 8/12/2010 4:28:00 PM
unplugged cool poem! DR! and thx for the comments...jimbo
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Date: 8/12/2010 11:25:00 AM
Quite interesting and thought provoking Poetry. It is like seeing a statue from different angles. While the statue remains the same, its impact differs from person to person because of the change of situation and location. Life is like that my friend. And many thanks for your precious comments on Patradoot 29. It’s a very different story. Thanks that you like it. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra........Diiamond Rich.
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Date: 8/11/2010 4:52:00 PM
This poem is not a pity poem or a complaining poem, but one ask the question where do we really stand in the world? because humanity is placing everything where it needs to be instaed letting the natural order happen in some cases. The church is waiting for Christ to return yet when someone mentions such a thing they are crazy or a false prohet. It seems such waiting is becoming more like a hobby then an actually promise. Enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 8/10/2010 8:56:00 PM
Not to far, rantings are always great cause there is something all can associate with. get an editor turn this stuff into songs and make a million dollars, the youth of today eats this stuff up, like life is so hard. it's just right lefr right left
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:36:00 PM
well, its reading like slam or a rap song to me~~ but a very good one indeed~~ you mentioned you are reading my poetry~~ it is so different than yours~~ I am the rippling stream and you are the raging waves at sea in a storm~~
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:13:00 PM
yes he is comming back. and if you get caught stealing that night; i'm sure that he'll make you an exception to the rule. if your faith is right. john
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Date: 8/10/2010 12:06:00 PM
Wakes the mind up wow. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us today via your awesome poetry Diiamond. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:36:00 AM
Like the way you put your thoughts to verse, here. Loved both the references to whishpered thoughts of Atlantis and "playing politics with our Christ." Very interesting with lots of thought-provoking lines, Diiamond. Love, Carolyn
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