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Ukraine-Unraveled By Dirty Cats

the sugar-coated jasmine sigh breeds jealousy - bellicose-blue sky. sunflowers vastly disappear in ash - the yellow beauties pure joy immortalize in dearth. Brutes, take your hands off the yellow-blue flag! Townsfolk stand tall with vultures' dissection. They hide their pride in each cranny and crag. Beasts never share in Ukraine's affection. blue and yellow twine unraveled by dirty cats - shadows in darkness 4/12/2022 A combination of forms: Crystalline- Kimo- Quatrain- Haiku Sponsor: Emile Pinet HowManySyllables & Rhymezone used

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James Horn

Date: 4/13/2022 10:30:00 AM

had been a big blitz so we would be blown to bits also lose our wits

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 11:23:00 AM

It’s awful :(

James Horn
Date: 4/13/2022 10:31:00 AM

while we lose our wits

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/13/2022 1:25:00 AM

Let the Ukraine flag stand high. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:13:00 AM

Right! ~ hugs

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2022 10:31:00 PM

" Brutes, take your hands off the yellow-blue flag!" I wish they would!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/13/2022 4:12:00 AM

I know! ~ hugs

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/12/2022 2:51:00 PM

Good political work for the contest. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. I feel so for the people of Ukraine. Thanks for the visit to my page. Your visits always inspire. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2022 3:04:00 PM

This was my second attempt for this contest..not easy. Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/12/2022 1:56:00 PM

The world is in a sad state, with so much war and aggression. Your poem is eloquent, outstanding and beautifully expressed, Kim. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2022 3:05:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn! Very sorry state…

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/12/2022 1:21:00 PM

The horrors of war personified! Excellent, emotive writing, Kim; best of luck in contest.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2022 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Joe!

Eve Roper

Date: 4/12/2022 12:54:00 PM

enjoyed reading, good luck, Kim. Blessings

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2022 3:06:00 PM

Thank you, Eve!