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U Or Me

As i look into your eyes, the first thing that pops into my mind is how long will this last? Over the time i came to realize that our love has grown into a way that we both cant understand. We fight and we fight and still lend each other a hand. Now our daughter is in this mix and we tend to use her as our strength, is it u or is me, that cant seem to make it right. All i want to say is i love u and no matter what ill be here by ur side.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/10/2016 12:20:00 PM
Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 7/19/2015 5:43:00 PM
Michael, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT
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Date: 6/9/2009 5:23:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:44:00 AM
Hey, the stuff of hope is to keep keeping on ... good write, my friend.
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Date: 6/5/2009 8:07:00 AM
Dude, don't give up, keep trying awesome poem.
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Date: 6/5/2009 3:14:00 AM
A classy write...!!!! great work Michael.......Keep it up....!!!
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