Two Worlds Collide

Trajectory paths, Two worlds colliding in space: Cataclysmic end. http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/space.php

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Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/14/2009 10:13:00 AM

Kaboom thats what I think when I read these words great imagry in such a short write well done !! love Jayne x

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/11/2009 11:46:00 AM

so much said in such small write . evokes great imagery.........very nice!

Date: 7/11/2009 9:56:00 AM

Nice use of alliteration and imagery for a interesting perspective. Creative use of this short form. Thank you for sharing your haiku with us and for your kind comments. Have a good day! Karen

Aleera De La Keur

Date: 7/11/2009 7:00:00 AM

Nice.....Aleera

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/10/2009 1:14:00 PM

Thank goodness for imagination and not reality. Sara