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Two Words

If I ask you To use two words To define yourself What would they be? Would they be words That you would say To someone else? Or they would be Too harsh ones to Repeat? If I ask you To use two words To define your loved ones What would they be? Would they be uplifting And caring ones? Would they bring happiness And a smile or sadness and hurt? If you ask me To use two words to define you They would certainly be The ones that reflect How amazing and strong you are How caring and sweet... *** December 12, 2016

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Darren White

Date: 12/15/2016 10:08:00 AM

Don't say those words aloud. Don't let anyone define you but you yourself ;)

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/15/2016 8:36:00 PM

Yup...Not saying them aloud... that's for each one to find theirs... :) :*

Daniel Turner

Date: 12/14/2016 10:05:00 AM

Complexities of life, Claudia. Well thought out and well written poem. How about deep thinker!

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/14/2016 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Daniel!!! I wanted to make people think about it... :) Hugs!!!

Chris Green

Date: 12/14/2016 7:02:00 AM

This was beautiful Claudia. I was jut in a training session that basically asked us to do the same thing, but using three words to describe ourselves. It was an eye and mind opening experience.

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/14/2016 5:34:00 PM

Thank you Chris!!! It is eye opening, specially when they ask us to define ourselves... hardest thing ever!!! hugs :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2016 5:47:00 AM

A poem to make us think about ourself and how we are perceived by others and vice versa.. what a challenge you have set to use two words to describe a person or ourself .... I am lost for words lol:-) hugs jan xx

Claudia Polydoro
Date: 12/14/2016 5:32:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!!! Usually we are all about complimenting and uplifting others, but we're always too harsh on ourselves... so, I wanted to make people think about it.. hugs!!! :)