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Two Women on the Shore - Edvard Munch

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there's always a hand in mine anchoring me solidly to the ground like additional gravity liable to crush my bones if a feather's weight were added though I don't fall into the ocean or float off with the clouds I'm not soothed but abraised agitation filing me away scattering me across the shoreline I avert my eyes, of course I do the waves crash and leave days turn to nights and I keep the peace my hand in yours

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Date: 11/23/2023 11:29:00 AM
Wonderful! A poem inspired from a painting. I enjoyed the imagery.
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Date: 11/23/2023 1:38:00 PM
Thank you Hilda - I love doing these. I appreciate your support x

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