Two Merry Leaves

They danced and they turned and they tumbled
In wind, how it sighed and it grumbled
With force, how it howled in its fury
But still they bore no trace of worry

In cool autumn winds they cavorted
My foot! How they laughed and they sported
They flew through the air just like pheasants
Till set in my excellent presence

“Red Leaf,” quoth I unto the leader
“To fly, there is nothing more neater
But weren’t you the least bit affrighted
As thus from the breeze you alighted?”

“Dear sir,” quoth the leaf as he flitted
“To fear, for a leaf ain’t permitted
We’re taught from a bud in the cradle
That even a crash isn’t fatal.”

“I say,” quoth I unto the yellow
“You seem to be such a neat fellow
I wonder how likes you this sporting
Or if you a damsel are courting?”

Quoth he, “All this sporting is splendid
The days of my courting are ended
My lover has flown to the northward
While I am constrained to fly southward.”

Before one more word could be spoken
The peace of that moment was broken
Away flew those leaves o’er the treeses
Borne by the chill autumn breezes


October 25, 2012.
For the contest, Up in the Autumn Air. Second place.
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Delaney Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 9:30 AM
Fun to read this tale of the leaves . Wise and whimsical at the same time. SuZ
Guzzi Avatar
January 10, 2013 at 12:37 PM
Trees are such an important part of life, one wonders what it would feel like to be so grounded and then set free! Thanks for stopping by my writes Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 12:53 PM
Ahhh!!Enjoyed this autumnal work..I could just see those lovers slowing spiraling down then caught in a breeze..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Brown Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 5:48 AM
Congrats on the feature Isaiah. Love, Carol
Zerbst Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 9:50 AM
I still can't believe it got featured! I've never been featured anywhere before.
Roberts Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 11:35 PM
Congratulations , i enjoyed reading your poem......Seren
Zerbst Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Thanks Seren. Glad you enjoyed it of course!
Onclaud Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 5:58 PM
fantastic rendition of the theme, isaiah... congrata with huggs!
Zerbst Avatar
November 6, 2012 at 9:52 AM
Thank you much! I really like the fall theme.
Connelly Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your win.. :-)
Zerbst Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Much thanks! What nice people here at p.s.
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Isaiah. Love, Carol
Zerbst Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:07 AM
Thanks! What do I write after this many times? I think I am starting to sound redundant. Smile! :)
Liwayway Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 6:03 AM
great write friend Isaiah. congratulations on your win. cheers
Zerbst Avatar
November 5, 2012 at 10:05 AM
Thank you so much!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 9:05 AM
CONGRATS ISAIAH ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN .. LOVELY IMAGERY LUV..
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:10 PM
Thanks! Glad you like the imagery.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 3:36 AM
Congratulations on your win Isaiah , love this , love your humour xx
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:09 PM
Thank you, thank you! I can't believe so many people like my poem!
Dietrich Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 9:42 PM
how very very clever this is. Congrats on your well deserved win!
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Thanks much! Glad you liked it.
Grisetti Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Thank you!
Johnson Avatar
November 3, 2012 at 7:19 PM
I love it Isaiah. I would have given it the top spot for its humor. I laughed with you at your "treeses". Love, Joyce
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:05 PM
Glad you liked it! Thanks for your comments.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 1:38 PM
I enjoyed the Leave's perspective, interesting idea. Well done. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. It looks like we got started here on the Soup around the same time.
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:12 PM
Thank you for your comments! I am glad that you liked it because I enjoy reading your poetry as well.
Grisetti Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Welcome to PS. I like the comments you left on my poem. I do not mind helpful criticism, as I mostly write free verse and haiku and am still learning the forms. I have had difficulty with meter in particular. Debbie helped me rewrite that poem as a kyrielle, but I have not posted it yet.
Grisetti Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 9:07 AM
Your poem shows a lot of imagination and is an origianl. It should do well in that contest.
Ellison Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:33 AM
"those leaves o’er the treeses"... got a kick out of this phraseology! Love the humour in this one, my friend! Cheers, Jack
Zerbst Avatar
November 4, 2012 at 4:14 PM
Glad you liked it! I wondered at first if people would like "treeses", but I guess most folks like it.
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