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Two Merry Leaves

They danced and they turned and they tumbled In wind, how it sighed and it grumbled With force, how it howled in its fury But still they bore no trace of worry In cool autumn winds they cavorted My foot! How they laughed and they sported They flew through the air just like pheasants Till set in my excellent presence “Red Leaf,” quoth I unto the leader “To fly, there is nothing more neater But weren’t you the least bit affrighted As thus from the breeze you alighted?” “Dear sir,” quoth the leaf as he flitted “To fear, for a leaf ain’t permitted We’re taught from a bud in the cradle That even a crash isn’t fatal.” “I say,” quoth I unto the yellow “You seem to be such a neat fellow I wonder how likes you this sporting Or if you a damsel are courting?” Quoth he, “All this sporting is splendid The days of my courting are ended My lover has flown to the northward While I am constrained to fly southward.” Before one more word could be spoken The peace of that moment was broken Away flew those leaves o’er the treeses Borne by the chill autumn breezes October 25, 2012. For the contest, Up in the Autumn Air. Second place.

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Date: 3/9/2023 9:30:00 AM
Fun to read this tale of the leaves . Wise and whimsical at the same time. SuZ
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Date: 1/10/2013 12:37:00 PM
Trees are such an important part of life, one wonders what it would feel like to be so grounded and then set free! Thanks for stopping by my writes Light & Love
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Date: 11/6/2012 12:53:00 PM
Ahhh!!Enjoyed this autumnal work..I could just see those lovers slowing spiraling down then caught in a breeze..Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 11/6/2012 5:48:00 AM
Congrats on the feature Isaiah. Love, Carol
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/6/2012 9:50:00 AM
I still can't believe it got featured! I've never been featured anywhere before.
Date: 11/5/2012 11:35:00 PM
Congratulations , i enjoyed reading your poem......Seren
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/6/2012 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Seren. Glad you enjoyed it of course!
Date: 11/5/2012 5:58:00 PM
fantastic rendition of the theme, isaiah... congrata with huggs!
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/6/2012 9:52:00 AM
Thank you much! I really like the fall theme.
Date: 11/5/2012 8:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.. :-)
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/5/2012 10:09:00 AM
Much thanks! What nice people here at p.s.
Date: 11/5/2012 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Up In The Autumn Air" contest Isaiah. Love, Carol
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/5/2012 10:07:00 AM
Thanks! What do I write after this many times? I think I am starting to sound redundant. Smile! :)
Date: 11/5/2012 6:03:00 AM
great write friend Isaiah. congratulations on your win. cheers
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/5/2012 10:05:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 11/4/2012 9:05:00 AM
CONGRATS ISAIAH ON A FANTASTIC WRITE AND WIN .. LOVELY IMAGERY LUV..
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:10:00 PM
Thanks! Glad you like the imagery.
Date: 11/4/2012 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Isaiah , love this , love your humour xx
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:09:00 PM
Thank you, thank you! I can't believe so many people like my poem!
Date: 11/3/2012 9:42:00 PM
how very very clever this is. Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:07:00 PM
Thanks much! Glad you liked it.
Date: 11/3/2012 8:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win.
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:06:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 11/3/2012 7:19:00 PM
I love it Isaiah. I would have given it the top spot for its humor. I laughed with you at your "treeses". Love, Joyce
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:05:00 PM
Glad you liked it! Thanks for your comments.
Date: 11/1/2012 1:38:00 PM
I enjoyed the Leave's perspective, interesting idea. Well done. Thanks for reading and commenting on my work. It looks like we got started here on the Soup around the same time.
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:12:00 PM
Thank you for your comments! I am glad that you liked it because I enjoy reading your poetry as well.
Date: 10/27/2012 9:06:00 AM
Welcome to PS. I like the comments you left on my poem. I do not mind helpful criticism, as I mostly write free verse and haiku and am still learning the forms. I have had difficulty with meter in particular. Debbie helped me rewrite that poem as a kyrielle, but I have not posted it yet.
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Joann Grisetti
Date: 10/27/2012 9:07:00 AM
Your poem shows a lot of imagination and is an origianl. It should do well in that contest.
Date: 10/27/2012 5:33:00 AM
"those leaves o’er the treeses"... got a kick out of this phraseology! Love the humour in this one, my friend! Cheers, Jack
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Isaiah Zerbst
Date: 11/4/2012 4:14:00 PM
Glad you liked it! I wondered at first if people would like "treeses", but I guess most folks like it.

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