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Two Halves of the Whole

Secret kisses in the dark make endless night seem bright; Endless kisses from the heart, my mind and soul's delight. I alone know the gift you bring of rose-resplendent light; Alone I know the things you bring, that bring my smiles to life. Soul-safe in your arms, and this darkness sinks from sight; Holding you, caressing you, our spirits one in flight. The colours you bring, hues of rhodonite and rubellite; The songs you sing, soothing vibrations through indigo night. A loving word, a tender touch, colours burst and ignite; A look, a smile, a certain style, I crave with all my might. A love inspired by the sensual words that you write; Loving you could mean, to me, there is no wrong or right. With our words combined poetic vision takes flight; With our words entwined lovers' hearts unite. The warmth you bring, a click, a love that feels so right; The love you give, a click, comforts me every night. Sending messages with my keys, hoping to excite; Receiving messages from your keys, our hearts unite When you touch me in tranquil amethyst twilight; When moonlight touches us in the grey and blue of night. Co- writen for the contest with John H Loving III and Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 5/17/2011 12:27:00 PM
congratulations my love for your half of the whole :-)
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in Lay's contest John iii. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/17/2011 8:52:00 AM
Great job John, Congratulations on your honored place in the winner's circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:49:00 PM
chemistry of two abounds... happy cheers for the glowing win, charlotte and john!:) hugggs
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Date: 5/16/2011 6:28:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of walayee, John
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:48:00 PM
Big congrats to you and Charlotte on your win with this excellent collaboration, dear John. Much love always, Carolyn
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Date: 5/16/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congrats John on your wonderful winning poem collaboration with Charlotte .. what a great team u two make.. with this awesome entry luv.. enjoy this super win in Lay's cool contest luv..
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Date: 5/16/2011 3:32:00 PM
Beautiful write John! Congrats! Lay
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Date: 3/4/2011 2:15:00 AM
A beautiful write John thank you
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Date: 2/28/2011 4:18:00 PM
This is one of your best and I am putting it in as one of my fav. AWESOME. Phyl
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:06:00 AM
Dear John, is this a collaboration for the contest? It is positively beautiful, my friend. I especially love the last verse -- what an image! I am out of town until Wednesday, but wanted to say hi. Love you and your poetry, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:39:00 AM
Very poetic, romantic, and emotive work..Enjoyed reading this morn.So glad that I chose this one..If for a contest, good luck with this one..Thanks for stopping by..Suet is something that I buy for the birds to eat...It is a mixture of fat of some kind and bird seed..I guess it is lard..Sometimes I will roll a pinecone in peanut butter then roll in seed and hang outside where I can watch the birds enjoy eating from the pinecone treat..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:20:00 AM
Beautiful! John. Thank you for shariaang, Lainie
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Date: 2/25/2011 4:01:00 AM
A "wonderful" poem you have created full of love and emotions, well done~~
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Date: 2/24/2011 6:40:00 PM
Beautiful love poem. John. Thank you for commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/24/2011 4:59:00 PM
you two are in tune. T. S.
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