Two Grown Men

Two grown men... Side by side... Apple shape...

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/17/2013 11:39:00 AM

Makes me think those grown men are quite the pair together... probably gossiping about their neighbors and telling ancient stories of long ago! It's really impressive when just 8 words can take you down many roads depending on how your mind works. Beautiful!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2013 10:20:00 PM

haha, Two fatties!! Love it.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/18/2013 2:15:00 PM

Two grown men... Side by side... Apple shape... let's make a ...pie! Excellent my dear! Yes, that is true! We look like Apples! Thank you!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 2/18/2013 1:18:00 PM

Another good one. It reminded me of Two Grumpy Old men. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/17/2013 8:29:00 PM

This is a tremendous and incredible write my friend! I loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a masterful piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/17/2013 4:48:00 PM

Hmmmm...could it be a funny reference to the tree of knowledge? In any case, this is cute.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/17/2013 9:27:00 AM

Trying to envision this! Is it apple or pear! Oh yes...we are the pear shaped beauties! ;) Thanks for your visit earlier on! Hugs!