Kash Poet Poet Alliteration

Two Eloping Evergreen Hearts

Two eloping hearts evergreen like equatorial rainforests,
entwined in the eternal escalator of love,
leaving a trail of lovely lavender fragrance;
her touchscreen face tempting him to touch,
to caress carelessly and to bring about cascaded tapestry .


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By:kashinath karmakar (19th Feb.2011)

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Poet Destroyer A November 9, 2013 at 11:02 PM nice win...Kash,, thanks for the hello....PD

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2013 at 7:18 PM so here is an oldie. Looks like you got on the HMs same as me in this one. Congrats and nice seeing you today, old friend!

Dr.Ram Mehta November 9, 2013 at 4:39 AM Congrats on the win , kash

Skat A November 8, 2013 at 9:03 PM Kash, CONGRATS ;) on your win....thanks for the support.... love ~SKAT~

Carol Sunshine Brown February 10, 2012 at 10:54 AM Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "What A Gem" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud February 8, 2012 at 10:00 AM okay, stop making me swoon, kashi buddy!(lol)... round of cheers for your great win.. relishing this with huggs! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 8, 2012 at 9:33 AM congrats Kash on another top ten win for this tremendous gem of a write luv.. emotions stirring..

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 8, 2012 at 4:30 AM A clever and lovely piece of work Kash. Congratulations x

Andrea Dietrich February 7, 2012 at 10:39 PM another score for your awesome alliterative poem, Kash. Congratulations and soupmail.

Bob Quigley February 7, 2012 at 10:31 PM Well written Kash. Congratulations

Tracy Edwards February 7, 2012 at 10:25 PM Congrats on your 9th place in my contest Kash..this is certainly a sweet lil gem xx

Carol Sunshine Brown June 30, 2011 at 5:42 AM Congratulations Kashinath on your win in Brian Strand's "Five To 14" contest. Love, Carol

Nette Onclaud June 29, 2011 at 10:20 PM wow, really smanhing, kashi… cheery KUDOS to you for the special top win :) huggs,

Debbie Guzzi June 29, 2011 at 6:05 PM Tadaaaaaaaaahhh! BIG WIN & part way to the 3 writes necessary for my contest too! Wonderful Congrad's Light & Love

Barbara Gorelick June 29, 2011 at 6:03 PM What a great alliteration..congrats on your big win. BG

Elaine George June 29, 2011 at 5:21 PM Many congrats on yor GREAT WIN, with this SENSATIONAL Alliteration, dear Kashinath. Lainie

Joyce Johnson June 29, 2011 at 3:28 PM Congratulations on your prize winning poem. Twice. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 29, 2011 at 1:12 PM Congrats Kash on your first place win with this most fantastic poetry my friend..luv..

Audrey Haick March 3, 2011 at 1:41 PM Congratulations on your awesome win in Adeleke's Contest, Kashinath! Beautiful! Always, Annalise

Carol Sunshine Brown February 28, 2011 at 11:52 AM Congratulations on your win in Adeleke's contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

John Freeman February 27, 2011 at 4:41 PM Hey Kashinath, good to see you at the top. Congratulations on your worthy poem's honored second place win. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick February 27, 2011 at 3:44 PM Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich February 26, 2011 at 11:44 PM Your lovely descriptiveness and alliteration paid off well, and you scored a GREAT win here, my friend. Congratulations to you!

Tahera Mannan February 26, 2011 at 7:41 PM Wow, you have woven magic with words. many hearty congrats for this victory.

Sami Helbaoui February 26, 2011 at 12:00 PM Amazing imagery... Truly amazing... Very happy happy for your win!! Love it, Sami

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