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Two Cats and a Mouse

Two Cats and a Mouse There were two cats in one house One of them liked to roam. The other preferred to stay home… There, the catnip mouse she pounced. © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen January 20, 2010 Poetic form: Chastushka

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Date: 1/20/2010 12:57:00 PM
I like your Chastushka form... they are pleasant.. Oh, and "Feverish" was not in that form.... That was free-verse..... The Chastushka is raw and not ready for you... I will let you know.... Good work......:JP]
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