Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Poet Chastushka

Two Cats and a Mouse

Two Cats and a Mouse

There were two cats in one house
One of them liked to roam.
The other preferred to stay home…
There, the catnip mouse she pounced.

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
January 20, 2010

Poetic form: Chastushka

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Jared Pickett January 20, 2010 at 12:57 PM I like your Chastushka form... they are pleasant.. Oh, and "Feverish" was not in that form.... That was free-verse..... The Chastushka is raw and not ready for you... I will let you know.... Good work......:JP]