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Two Birds

two birds unaware of their popularity on poetry sites



NOTE: Is this contest over already?? Darn ...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 10:23 PM
Hah! :)))
Hicks Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 11:59 AM
It probably would have been more amusing if you were posting at about the time this contest was going on. Lol!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 7:48 PM
Yeah... the do seem to be distinctly uninterested!!! Well done Timothy. Best wishes, Keith
Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:06 PM
Well you know what they say about disinterest, right? ... it's for the birds! (yes that was dry) ... thanks for the humorous comment, Keith ... but it isn't too surprising as I see whoever took your picture, in that avatar ... was right in the middle of a laugh!
Callus Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 10:46 AM
Having opted for the quiet life, they suddenly find themselves in the limelight! It's all the fault of modern technology!! ~ Just popped in for a quick look....very busy!! ~ Regards // paul
Hicks Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 10:56 PM
The poor birds never knew what was coming... lol. Understandable, Paul.
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 8:13 PM
U won anyway. Short, imagination at work, love sharp images of black and white, together. Have a wonderful weekend.
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 9:19 PM
You as well, Iris! Sometimes my pen is just a wee bit silly ... glad some connect with the humor, ha ha.
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 2:12 PM
aww this is very clever - such a shame you missed the contest Timothy it's happened to me 3 times recently:-( hugs jan xx
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Sad to have that happen Jan :( At least the inspiration will always be there and you got new poems :)
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Some of those contest fill rather fast if only 35 entries are allowed and the date is set at one month..Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like it would have been a winner..Thanks for stopping by..I don't go back in and read comments because most of the time it only says thank you and that takes too much of my time..Occasionally I will return and read a comment or two..I only have so much time that I can be on here..I have to use the time wisely..Thanks again for all the visits..Sara
Allison Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:28 PM
The missing comments happens to me too Sara it is a mystery why it happens:-( hugs Jan xx
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:16 PM
That does sounds annoying ... weird! And yeah you're right ... it all depends on the difficulty of the contest, how many are allowed, etc.,
Kendrick Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Sometimes some of my comments don't post..I don't know why but that is very annoying when I know I have commented on a work but my comment is not there..Sara..
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:52 PM
hahaha. Where are all the other birds then??
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Probably out somewhere updating their Facebook and Instagram accounts (the fowl beasts).
Devnath  Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Smile with serene beauty.... It's nice my lovely friend, bl
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Thanks BL. Not sure if I'd go as far as beautiful, but I'm happy you saw the humor in it ... ha ha. Your support and comments are a joy.
Gorelick Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Wonderful...I'm smiling. BG
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:53 PM
Fun to pass the smiles around!
Breidenthal Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:29 AM
These dudes or dudettes are just enjoying life. : ) Cute monoku! Always, Laura
Hicks Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 3:42 PM
I guess they took, "Life is a beach" literally! Lol ... dudes and dudettes ... I like it!
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