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Twisted Dreams

Twisted dreams invade the mind With the perpetual dance of restless sleep In hollow dreamscapes I wander blind Chaotic eclipses with darkness to keep Spiraled staircase descending deep As visions of apocalypse slowly seep Masses in hysteria, looking for signs Through prophetic kaleidoscope their world is defined A cacophony of voices hitch a ride On a speeding asteroid as worlds collide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/4/2018 6:16:00 AM
Very nice kind of poetry..
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Date: 10/3/2017 5:02:00 AM
This a great poem, such a well deserved win. Congratulations :)
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Date: 9/30/2017 7:00:00 PM
This is simply outstanding Joseph. I see why it garnered First Place! Congratulations! : )
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Date: 9/30/2017 4:05:00 PM
An awesome write Joseph. Congratulations on your well-deserved win!
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Date: 9/30/2017 1:13:00 PM
Joseph, wow congratulations on your big win and getting all.those words in !
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Date: 9/28/2017 6:05:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...top place for a top write...great stuff...^WW^
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:47:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2017 5:17:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joseph. That truly sounds like a nightmare, well done.
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Date: 9/28/2017 1:49:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS for your top win Joseph! Yay! :)
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Date: 9/28/2017 12:30:00 PM
Well done Joseph I enjoyed how you used the 8 words, and especially the rhyme, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 9/28/2017 4:43:00 PM
Thank you so much for my top placement John
Date: 9/28/2017 6:26:00 AM
Great use of those words, Joseph, and a pretty dark write ...
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:35:00 AM
Quite a chilling poem Jospeh! you twisted those words in so well into your dreams good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2017 7:00:00 AM
What an amazing write Joseph, if this is for a contest, I wish you all the best...Maria
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Date: 9/22/2017 10:00:00 PM
Various visuals ... Soothing sounds ... Enjoyable indeed ...
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Date: 9/22/2017 5:14:00 PM
Well written poem Joseph!
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Date: 9/22/2017 4:36:00 PM
Wow Joseph! This poem is outstanding! It should be a winner in the contest. Very well done :)
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