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Twin Flames

Thrice I found you burnt to ashes Withered and alone, I sewed on patches Ideal soulmate, destiny had spoken Nurturing your fragility, torn and broken Fawning passion, your features ravishing Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing Adjoined in desire, our fire illuminated Memorizing every inch, enthralled and jaded Exquisite devotion to my beloved James Sacred vows between two twin flames Date Written: March 1, 2016

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 10/28/2016 6:45:00 PM

CONGRATS on your great write!:)

Francis J Grasso

Date: 10/28/2016 4:52:00 PM

James is very blessed. Beautiful thoughts! Congratulations, Laura! ...Fran

Larry Bradfield

Date: 10/28/2016 4:50:00 PM

Wonderfully done!..Larry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/28/2016 4:40:00 PM

Ten lines or less that can be read out loud in the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Elaine George

Date: 10/28/2016 4:18:00 PM

Great Acrostic, Laura. Many congrats on your win. Lainey

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/19/2016 2:32:00 PM

A beautifully written acrostic.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/16/2016 8:17:00 AM

What an awesome acrostic!! Congrats Laura, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/16/2016 12:14:00 PM

many thanks Teddy :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/15/2016 8:07:00 AM

Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. An excellent write as always. The beauty of romance and Love within words so simple to enthrall. A seven for this work Luloo....Vlad.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 7:29:00 PM

thank you Vlad :)-luloo

Tom Quigley

Date: 3/14/2016 10:38:00 PM

Deep and rich, as seems typical for you! You've clearly paid the dues that allow you to sing the blues so sweetly.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 7:29:00 PM

Thank you Tom :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/13/2016 8:54:00 PM

Great poem, Laura. Romantic and draws you in. Best line? "Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing" ... really rolls of the tongue. Congrats on your placement.

Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 7:28:00 PM

thank you Tim :)-luloo

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/13/2016 4:26:00 PM

Nicely penned, luloo-- and very romantic to boot :) congratulations on your win :)

Lu Loo
Date: 3/15/2016 7:28:00 PM

Thank you Sam :)-luloo