Beautiful Scars Poet Acrostic

Twin Flames

Thrice I found you burnt to ashes

Withered and alone, I sewed on patches

Ideal soulmate, destiny had spoken

Nurturing your fragility, torn and broken



Fawning passion, your features ravishing

Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing

Adjoined in desire, our fire illuminated

Memorizing every inch, enthralled and jaded

Exquisite devotion to my beloved James

Sacred vows between two twin flames



Date Written: March 1, 2016 

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Cheryl Hoffman October 28, 2016 at 6:45 PM CONGRATS on your great write!:)

Francis J Grasso October 28, 2016 at 4:52 PM James is very blessed. Beautiful thoughts! Congratulations, Laura! ...Fran

Larry Bradfield October 28, 2016 at 4:50 PM Wonderfully done!..Larry

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2016 at 4:40 PM Ten lines or less that can be read out loud in the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara

Elaine George October 28, 2016 at 4:18 PM Great Acrostic, Laura. Many congrats on your win. Lainey

Lenny Gazbowski April 19, 2016 at 2:32 PM A beautifully written acrostic.

Teddy Kimathi March 16, 2016 at 8:17 AM What an awesome acrostic!! Congrats Laura, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Beautiful Scars March 16, 2016 at 12:14 PM many thanks Teddy :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven March 15, 2016 at 8:07 AM Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. An excellent write as always. The beauty of romance and Love within words so simple to enthrall. A seven for this work Luloo....Vlad. Beautiful Scars March 15, 2016 at 7:29 PM thank you Vlad :)-luloo

Tom Quigley March 14, 2016 at 10:38 PM Deep and rich, as seems typical for you! You've clearly paid the dues that allow you to sing the blues so sweetly. Beautiful Scars March 15, 2016 at 7:29 PM Thank you Tom :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks March 13, 2016 at 8:54 PM Great poem, Laura. Romantic and draws you in. Best line? "Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing" ... really rolls of the tongue. Congrats on your placement. Beautiful Scars March 15, 2016 at 7:28 PM thank you Tim :)-luloo

Sam Jameson March 13, 2016 at 4:26 PM Nicely penned, luloo-- and very romantic to boot :) congratulations on your win :) Beautiful Scars March 15, 2016 at 7:28 PM Thank you Sam :)-luloo

Charlie Smith March 13, 2016 at 2:10 PM No surprise here, congratulations Luloo Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 3:26 PM Thank you Charlie:)-luloo

Sandra Haight March 13, 2016 at 1:58 PM Beautiful and romantic, Laura. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 3:26 PM Thank you Sandra:)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores March 13, 2016 at 11:32 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Laura Beautiful Scars March 13, 2016 at 12:29 PM Thank you very much Nayda. I'm grateful you enjoyed it :)-luloo

Anisha Dutta March 6, 2016 at 1:15 AM Great poem Laura. Wish you best for contest. Anisha D Beautiful Scars March 8, 2016 at 12:44 PM Thank you Anisha:)-luloo

Constance La France March 1, 2016 at 9:48 PM Laura, B E A U T I F U L !! I am loving this 7 ~ Beautiful Scars March 2, 2016 at 8:18 AM Cute, thank you :)-luloo

Eve Roper March 1, 2016 at 8:20 PM Enjoyed reading passionate write . Good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Eve Beautiful Scars March 1, 2016 at 8:45 PM Many thanks Eve :)-luloo

Charlie Smith March 1, 2016 at 7:31 PM Good work. Best wishes in the contest Laura Beautiful Scars March 1, 2016 at 8:45 PM Thank you Charlie :)-luloo