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Twin Flames

Thrice I found you burnt to ashes

Withered and alone, I sewed on patches

Ideal soulmate, destiny had spoken

Nurturing your fragility, torn and broken



Fawning passion, your features ravishing

Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing

Adjoined in desire, our fire illuminated

Memorizing every inch, enthralled and jaded

Exquisite devotion to my beloved James

Sacred vows between two twin flames



Date Written: March 1, 2016 

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Cheryl Hoffman Date: 10/28/2016 6:45:00 PM CONGRATS on your great write!:) Login to Reply

Francis J Grasso Date: 10/28/2016 4:52:00 PM James is very blessed. Beautiful thoughts! Congratulations, Laura! ...Fran Login to Reply

Larry Bradfield Date: 10/28/2016 4:50:00 PM Wonderfully done!..Larry Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/28/2016 4:40:00 PM Ten lines or less that can be read out loud in the winners’ list is awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 10/28/2016 4:18:00 PM Great Acrostic, Laura. Many congrats on your win. Lainey Login to Reply

Lenny Gazbowski Date: 4/19/2016 2:32:00 PM A beautifully written acrostic. Login to Reply

Teddy Kimathi Date: 3/16/2016 8:17:00 AM What an awesome acrostic!! Congrats Laura, for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/16/2016 12:14:00 PM many thanks Teddy :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven Date: 3/15/2016 8:07:00 AM Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. An excellent write as always. The beauty of romance and Love within words so simple to enthrall. A seven for this work Luloo....Vlad. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/15/2016 7:29:00 PM thank you Vlad :)-luloo

Tom Quigley Date: 3/14/2016 10:38:00 PM Deep and rich, as seems typical for you! You've clearly paid the dues that allow you to sing the blues so sweetly. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/15/2016 7:29:00 PM Thank you Tom :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks Date: 3/13/2016 8:54:00 PM Great poem, Laura. Romantic and draws you in. Best line? "Lingering kisses, two bodies lavishing" ... really rolls of the tongue. Congrats on your placement. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/15/2016 7:28:00 PM thank you Tim :)-luloo

Sam Jameson Date: 3/13/2016 4:26:00 PM Nicely penned, luloo-- and very romantic to boot :) congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/15/2016 7:28:00 PM Thank you Sam :)-luloo

Charlie Smith Date: 3/13/2016 2:10:00 PM No surprise here, congratulations Luloo Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/13/2016 3:26:00 PM Thank you Charlie:)-luloo

Sandra Haight Date: 3/13/2016 1:58:00 PM Beautiful and romantic, Laura. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/13/2016 3:26:00 PM Thank you Sandra:)-luloo

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores Date: 3/13/2016 11:32:00 AM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Laura Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/13/2016 12:29:00 PM Thank you very much Nayda. I'm grateful you enjoyed it :)-luloo

Anisha Dutta Date: 3/6/2016 1:15:00 AM Great poem Laura. Wish you best for contest. Anisha D Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/8/2016 12:44:00 PM Thank you Anisha:)-luloo

Constance La France Date: 3/1/2016 9:48:00 PM Laura, B E A U T I F U L !! I am loving this 7 ~ Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/2/2016 8:18:00 AM Cute, thank you :)-luloo

Eve Roper Date: 3/1/2016 8:20:00 PM Enjoyed reading passionate write . Good luck in the contest :-) Hugs Eve Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/1/2016 8:45:00 PM Many thanks Eve :)-luloo

Charlie Smith Date: 3/1/2016 7:31:00 PM Good work. Best wishes in the contest Laura Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 3/1/2016 8:45:00 PM Thank you Charlie :)-luloo