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Twilight's Magic

“The sky prepares the sun for night Where drifting clouds are slowly steeping In tepid pools of waning light.” I lie with my true love by me upon warm sand where there comes creeping toward our beach – azure of the sea! It isn’t long before the sky starts spilling colors as if weeping tears so lovely I could cry! My sweetheart leans in for a kiss. I feel as if my heart is leaping. Such joy is love in twilight’s bliss. We stay there watching sun sink low. Gratitude for God’s gifts we’re reaping. How I wish time would go slow. Enveloped by dark, we embrace. Sun behind the mountains is sleeping, and now the moon will take sun’s place. Moments such as these do not last. That’s why in my mind I’ll be keeping magic that faded all too fast. June 1, 2021 Stanza one chosen for my first verse For Joseph May's Choose Your Form 2 Poetry Contest For Brian Strand's All Yours (june 7)Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/8/2021 7:57:00 AM
These crystalline lines and their twilight-like beauty enormously titillated my poetry-enchanted palate. Your poetic twist is largely akin to mine...somehow revealing we may be ardent fans of the same poets and favorite poems - Shakespeare, Milton, Coleridge, Wordsworth, Marlow, Sidney, Yeats, Keats, Kipling, Longfellow, Burns ...just to mention a few. And so I'm particularly excited you penned and shared this scintillating opus, Andrea!
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Date: 6/8/2021 4:13:00 AM
This is beautiful. I love it! God bless you and congrats dear Andrea. Love, Gina
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Date: 6/8/2021 2:36:00 AM
Lovely poem, Andrea: Congratulations and all the best. SuZ
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Date: 6/7/2021 9:16:00 PM
A winning poem wins, congrats, Andrea
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Date: 6/7/2021 6:57:00 PM
Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/7/2021 6:46:00 AM
A lovely romantic poem Andrea. Congratulations on your deserving win. I have missed a lot while I was away. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 6/6/2021 10:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write. I was on the sandy beach watching the sun go down. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
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Date: 6/5/2021 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea on your winning masterpiece poem colorful with emotions and sunset colors.
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Date: 6/5/2021 6:42:00 AM
Romantic rhyme of twilight's magic...your ink never fails to soothe the readers' mind dear friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 6/5/2021 2:59:00 AM
Wonderful write Andrea, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/4/2021 7:53:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea. I visualized and felt this beach-filled experience. Such a beautiful blending with the chosen stanza. Blessings.
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Date: 6/2/2021 11:02:00 PM
Lovely, you have done so well, sure to win with this magical romantic piece, Andrea:)
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Date: 6/2/2021 12:40:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, The chosen stanza inspired you to write a well-written dreamy and magical piece. I enjoyed it from to finish. Well done. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 6/2/2021 5:34:00 AM
A magical moment captured in words. Thanks for crafting and sharing this beautiful Twilight Magic with us.
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Date: 6/1/2021 11:29:00 AM
Twilight magic shines through your words, Andrea. Enjoyed the romantic tone of your poem.
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Date: 6/1/2021 10:46:00 AM
Wonderful, again.
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:53:00 AM
Splendid poem. Loved your rhyme. A great romantic poem and the colors spilling from the sky. Hugs
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Date: 6/1/2021 9:27:00 AM
Ah, "such joy is love in twilight's bliss" is such a marvelous line, Andrea. Your poem elicits so many memories of sharing at twilight, while listening to the rushing surf. Nice work!
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:40:00 AM
Superb write Andrea, quite romantic with wonderful symbolism. Enjoyed reading thanks for sharing
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Date: 6/1/2021 7:21:00 AM
Beautiful imagery and the feel of romantic love, Andrea. Good luck in the contest; I enjoyed reading . Hugs Eve
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