Twilight's Fading Light

Twilight’s fading light silently morphs into
A cobalt sky, with diamonds sprinkled
Twinkling, and the sweet scent of blooming
Jasmine lingers heady in the air.
Earth’s dark curtain coaxes tiny creatures
To sing their songs and move along
To gather food and feed their young
Without the heat of daytime’s sun.
Moonbeams with their gentle glow
Illuminate their little paths as friendly trees
Cast darkened shadows on the garden wall.
Dew drops form on blades of grass
And cover all in frosty white until the dawn
Draws down the diamonds from the sky to
To spread across the meadow’s peaceful rising. 

*For Laura Mckenzie’s “Beyond Nightfall” Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 9:38 PM
gosh, connie, it's time for you to get at least two more poems up pronto. I feel like I owe you at least three responses tonight for all your sweet comments. I should change He to she for my chicken little poem! So glad you liked it. LUv, Andrea
Owens Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 2:19 PM
Wow ...now that's what I call a nightfall...enjoyed..especially the sweet scent of blooming Jasmine...Marty
Culverhouse Avatar
March 3, 2010 at 4:14 AM
very beautiful poem, enjoyed reading it, today
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2010 at 11:56 PM
Hey, connie, I don't think I see other poems here that I haven't read already. Thanks so much for reading three of mine tonight. I am so bad, here I am missing american Idol too. I am just now finally going to post my chicken poems. I need your help deciding between them! Glad you liked Yeti. haha. LUv, Andrea
K. Avatar
March 1, 2010 at 3:46 AM
I'm also including this in my list, Connie--the title alone is beautiful, and your magnificent poem supports i t all throughout--a dream of a poem, Connie, just beautiful!
Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Aha, here it is, your most awesome poem that is sure to get into the winner's circle. Crossing my fingers for ya. And this goes to favs!
Byrne Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 10:36 PM
Oh my God, you really can write, can't you.....................I am blown away!
Delacroix Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 8:19 PM
A very beautiful nightsky you describe here in this well written poem. Thanks for sharing and good luck on the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
Haick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Excellent, beautiful poem and entry for Laura's "Beyond Nightfall" Contest, Connie! I am sure this is a winner, hands down! Peace, love, Audry
Caliri Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 12:24 PM
Very nice...I submitted to this contest too, and I think also found the word "curtain" as nice expression... I heard through the soupvice that you are from hawaii. If so, which island? I live on Oahu...
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 10:06 AM
So much serenity in this beautiful description of nightfall, Connie. So many awesome lines, especially "Jasmine lingers heady in the air." That powerful scent does seem to fill our heads, doesn't it? Good luck in the contest! Love, carolyn
Trevino Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:57 AM
tittle caught my attention lol... i'm a twilight fanatic... what teenager isn't... this was a very beautiful poem by the way i liked the descriptions in it... Royal T.
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