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Twilight Tears

Shadows appear Our day near done My tears falling.. Setting sun gold Crickets bold song Birds fold their wings.. Soon comes the night Dim the light grows Hold tight to me... Barbara Gorelick Twilight Than-Bauk contest..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/19/2012 4:42:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2012 5:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "Than-Bauk" contest Barbara. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2012 2:42:00 PM

very well done, and congrats on your win.

George Aul

Date: 4/18/2012 12:55:00 PM

Very nice.........George

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/18/2012 11:39:00 AM

Well told. I don't know hw she could judge among them. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/18/2012 8:34:00 AM

As for me, this one is the best of the lot, thnx and congrats, jag

Broken Butterfly

Date: 4/16/2012 3:03:00 AM

Very pretty Barbara, best of luck

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2012 7:41:00 PM

wow, yours is one I REALLY like alot, Barbara. SO nice to hear from you. It's not often but I always enjoy seeing your poems!

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/15/2012 7:24:00 PM

My Dearest Only Most Beloved Barbara I see a Winner I have to look this form up A Superb Write, Intriguing, How are YOU? I miss YOU, I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry