Twilight Street

It seemed the day would never end.
'Murphy's Law' had been my friend.
Phones that rang, needy voices, terrible choices,
Undone chores, a toothache sore, even more.
Problems still unsolved, 
Issues not resolved.
A troubled day, a weary brain.
I couldn't wait to hide, ....escape
That night I tumbled in between the sheets.
At last, ... I fell to slumber's keep.

From blurry depth's of morning's stupor,
Where consciousness droops in a vague defeat,
I arose once more to light and meaning,
The familiar voice of twilight street:
     A dog's gruff bark; the sound of tears,
     A rasp of a broom that sweeps the years
     Tramping feet, and shifting gears;
     And rippled laughs of childish jeers...
Deep was the vaporous peace of my dreams,
Where angst nor fear won't be discerned.
My life called back from twilight sleep,
I return once more to face the street
Back to the street of reality....

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Catch Phrase" Carrie. Love, Carol
Green Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Reality is really lame sometimes. I, also, sleep a lot when I want some escapism. Really good poem and a well deserved placement!
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June 15, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in the Catch Phrase contest.. .. a nice write around your assigned phrase.. enjoy another triumph.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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June 7, 2010 at 12:13 PM
wonderful catch phrase, nicely written, enjoyed.. p.d.
K. Avatar
June 6, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Very cleverly done in using your catch phrase, Carrie :) Enjoyed this entry of yours :) --nikko :)
Brown Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 7:00 AM
This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Carrie. The best to you in the contest. I need my mind to get in gear so I can get mine written. Love, Carol
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June 3, 2010 at 10:18 PM
oh, my, I thought you were doing Murphy's law until I got close to the end! As usual, a very fine entry from you , Carrie. I wish I could get into this one. I am afraid I hate my catch phrase. I wish I could trade it in. But I can't!! Luv, Andrea
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June 3, 2010 at 9:51 PM
Dear Carrie, I can see why YOU are Number 1 in Soup Contest Wins YOUR non-STOP Luck WITH YOUR Talent a WIN ALWAYS YOUR Liege ...HG -- SOUP MAIL CALL
Gorelick Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful Carrie..you aare so talented..your descriptions are so right on. BG
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June 3, 2010 at 1:56 PM
Back to the street of reality. .what a great poet you are,Goodluck Mrs. Richards!C elene.
Kendrick Avatar
June 3, 2010 at 1:50 PM
Great write that should do well in the contest...Good luck.. I especially like the first stanza second line and the second stanza first two lines...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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