Twilight In Sonnet

Moments of melting orange in the west
You are a softened shadow of morning
Splashing and sprinkling colors in sunset
What a mesmerizing goodbye saying 

The wind is soft, clouds aloft and shiny
Your face blushing in the departing light
Tiny sands in your perfume behind me
Hundreds of hues in a beautiful flight

Look at the lovely portal of the night
Listen to the wind blowing dark and wild
Breathe in ashen golden briny twilight
Supple sun holds the hands of mild moonlight

Getting close with the blue and orange sky
Let’s walk on the sands of time, you and I
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23/9/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/29/2016 7:54:00 PM
Hi Probir, firstly a belated congratulations on your placement in the contest. Abeautiful sonnet my friend with such excellent content. I do love the twilight and your words bring it so easy to my mind.I drink in your words and such visions i see in my mind. You paint a wonderful canvas Probir. Have a wonderful Friday....Mike. A definite seven my friend.
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:46:00 PM
So nice of you Vladislav to say like that ... Thank you....
Date: 9/25/2016 11:30:00 AM
beautiful sonnet Probir...congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:54:00 AM
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Date: 9/25/2016 8:00:00 AM
Great imagery, Probir:) congratulations on your win:)
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:55:00 AM
Thank you Jo ...
Date: 9/25/2016 6:24:00 AM
'lovely portal of the night.' beautiful line. Well done, Probir. Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 9/25/2016 11:56:00 AM
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Date: 9/25/2016 3:18:00 AM
What a lovely poem, Probir. Congrats on your win. Agnes
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Date: 9/25/2016 4:25:00 AM
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Date: 9/24/2016 8:52:00 PM
A very lovely and well-written Sonnet, Probir. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Sandra
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Date: 9/25/2016 4:26:00 AM
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Date: 9/24/2016 7:41:00 PM
Back to say congratulations Probir on your placement in the contest. It's a beautiful sonnet!
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Date: 9/25/2016 4:27:00 AM
Thank you once again, Daniel ...
Date: 9/24/2016 5:14:00 PM
Well written, and Congratulations. Looked like a winner.
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Date: 9/25/2016 4:28:00 AM
Thank you, Janis ...
Date: 9/24/2016 3:41:00 PM
Congratulations Probir on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/25/2016 4:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nayda ...
Date: 9/23/2016 12:21:00 PM
Probir, this is a beautiful, well written sonnet. I love the flow of it. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/23/2016 12:37:00 PM
Thank you, Janis ...
Date: 9/23/2016 7:16:00 AM
Nice one, which is more glorious, the dawn, or the eve?
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:22:00 AM
Thank you ... The one you will prefer ... And whom will you prefer ... that your constitution is to infer ...
Date: 9/23/2016 6:59:00 AM
Lovely sonnet, Probir. Very descriptive and really beautiful. Good luck!
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:22:00 AM
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:41:00 AM
Nice SONNET, I am not strong in poems but I'll tell you to read Muzahidul Reza's SONNETS those are more lively I think
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:23:00 AM
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:21:00 AM
https://www.bing.com/search?q=twilight+time+on+youtube&form=WNSGPH&qs=SW&cvid=ac5d6c55f0c24eacb1160f23b042332d&pq=twilight+time+on+youtube&nclid=223510F8277B1497603ABEB8B92AEE3D&ts=1474629582651&cc=US&setlang=en-US
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Date: 9/23/2016 6:16:00 AM
True poetry. At home in any century and understood in all. Perfection though of course just out of us mortals grasp. Still great fun seeing how close we can get. Cheers David.
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Date: 9/23/2016 7:23:00 AM
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