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Twilight

TWILIGHT She creeps across the fading sunset darkness stalking in shadow following the whims of time blowing out the flickering candles closing the windows on a silenced day. She is less feared, more subtle, than Death’s slashing scythe. Stealth is her game, secrecy her strength, table setter for the final curtain call, her cool shivering chill the first - and last - hint of her presence as she creeps across the fading sunset. 9/21/2016

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Date: 9/30/2016 7:43:00 AM
wow, so deep John "her cool shivering chill the first and last..." love that line...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/29/2016 11:43:00 PM
Way to go John! Congrats.
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Date: 9/29/2016 10:28:00 PM
John, I really enjoyed your poem. Thank you for participating in my FIRST contest. Now I know how HARD it is to choose. There is so much talent on the Soup! Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/24/2016 6:54:00 AM
beautiful imaginative story , enjoyed fictionalizing it , thank you
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