Twenty One- Yearning Bliss

A good time to introspect did I felt
Twenty one gave new aspirations
A time to move out from pamper shell
Show to the world I do exist on my own
Planning and moving with a sketch
Stroke sudden threw it all from me
Senses lost for days and months
Time elapsed going to a moron journey
Dreams still breathing path walked lost.
Twenty one meant to give results
Seeds sown since childhood after all
Out of sight seemed all that meant
Let it go, How come? How come?
Joined the pieces together with pills
Racing to the similar though lately
Alone, all alone have to find recovery
Dream woven soul, eyes enclosed all
Reached the path of success finally
With lessons beyond books ever hold
Twenty one lane - a yearning bliss enfolds.

Written by: Sneha Agarwal
For the Contest - ....AT THIS AGE
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/16/2012 1:15:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in Nette's "At This Age" contest Sneha. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/14/2012 7:37:00 AM
Congrats Sneha on your win.Yes it was a good recovery.Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 1/13/2012 11:15:00 PM
What a cool title. yearning bliss. For a very good age!! Congratulations on your win with this very nice poem
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Date: 1/13/2012 9:02:00 PM
Congrats on the win for this poem and incredible recovery from a stroke at such a young age! I can only imagine how difficult that must have been! Thank you for sharing your story with us, Cyndi
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Date: 1/13/2012 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on having this entry selected to rank among the winners.
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