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Brian Johnston

July 8, 2014

 

Last night's late flight and the glow of city lights made this poem out of nothing.

Like an excited smear of photo luminescent bacteria, Trembling with a beauty so fearfully short lived, On a dark globe, 'mother earth, ' that is itself stardust, Mankind's cities gleam feebly, tremulous, at night Against the infinite blackness that is space. Space that is itself the ultimate black body, For no light, no energy, can escape its depths. Light is only seen here, in fact, If you happen to be in its way, As it rushes past on its way to equilibrium, A kind of stasis, where everything is the same, And God, if He exists, perhaps melts into all we know, Imagination, now indistinguishable, From the lack thereof, A lover you will never see again. And the star you still see hanging From the branch of the universe's tree, Like the turtle of ancient lore That carries the earth on its back, Is not the same star at all But a star diminished by a single photon of light You know, the one that struck your fancy, Impacting the retina of your eye, which is actually Naked brain, grey matter exposed to light. This photon, in so loving you, Surrenders its identity completely, Just for the chance to warm you one iota. I wonder what, in fact, happens to a photon, That in all of time, does not strike anything? Has it too served God's purpose? Oh God, please promise me, That when You dream, Your dreams will always be, If not of me, then, at least of this creation, For, Oh God, it is so beautiful!

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Date: 8/9/2014 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful piece of poetry. Great write!Kika
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Date: 8/8/2014 7:16:00 PM
Congratulations, Brian, on a great win.
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Date: 8/7/2014 11:18:00 PM
hey, I see you won in the turtle contest. BIG congrats to you on your well deserved win.
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:09:00 PM
yes, you can read a person's poem and talk to them under their poems like I am doing with you right now. OR you can go up to their name and click on that little picture of a soup bowl. It takes you to soup mail so you can talk to them that way. I'll do it right now on YOUR soup bowl so you can see how it works.
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Date: 7/19/2014 9:08:00 PM
wow, Brian, is this for the turtle contest? there is a line in this poem referring to the turtle legend, and there is a free verse contest right now that I think this would be perfect for since you brought in the symbol of the turtle. I just now saw you had gone to my wall and tried to contact me. I never see my wall so it was by chance I just saw your message to me. Have you never commented to my poems before? If you don't do that, I probably never see you.
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