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Helpless! I stare up at human children. Their discovery of me has begun. I, slow- moving in undergrowth before I know it, am flipped upside down. I move my legs, desperate, they grip air while, amusement of children ripples like a brook, Look they chuckle. “ He’s stuck” And they poke at me and form a ring of eyes, above. I am desperate for kindness now I retract my neck and limbs quiet as death until bored the children seeing no movement, right me again, I stumble on, until a foot with toes poised to flip is stopped by words I prayed for defensive, kind “Let the poor thing go.” I hide in the cool leaves before my last desperate lurch, pond water surges over me, I swim, my legs paddle. The water lilies are beautiful

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Date: 8/22/2023 10:23:00 PM
Well there was real turtle ..MAX..lol))) in Your turtle writed, who became delighted Suz.' Keep em coming girl.'
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Date: 7/20/2023 4:09:00 AM
wow Suz I just found this. Its really incredible and so real. you did a wonderful job of not only making the turtle a victim, but we all rooted for him as a hero too. Great poem. Loved it
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/20/2023 9:08:00 AM
Thanks SV. So nice to have you visit. It is always so sad to me if I see cruelty to animals, no matter how small or large they are. We humans should know better. Cheers, SuZ
Date: 7/8/2023 8:13:00 AM
Lovely imagery at the end, and the matching photo was a plus, SuZ. Thanks for sharing your "turtle" poem with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/8/2023 11:50:00 AM
Hi Bill: So happy you enjoyed. I had this in a folder to post long ago but forgot but your poem prompted me to dig it out. Thanks much. SuZ
Date: 7/8/2023 5:32:00 AM
speaks volumes about humanity....but in its defense, i have worked with a population of the caring....so this poem for me points to the reality with time they come to be illuminated....wonderful use of the turtle
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/8/2023 11:51:00 AM
I agree, Timray: If there is a spark of goodness it must be nurtured before it goes completely out. Best, SuZ
Date: 7/7/2023 7:25:00 PM
A wonderful poem from the perspective of a turtle! I enjoyed this creative write! Blessings, Kim M
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 7/8/2023 11:52:00 AM
How nice to have a visit from you Kim: Glad this little story tickled you. SuZ

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