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Turned Upside Down By a Group of Children:

Helpless! I stare up at human children.
Their discovery of me has begun.
I, slow- moving in undergrowth
before I know it, am flipped
upside down.
 
I move my legs, desperate, they grip air
while, amusement of children
ripples like a brook,
 
Look they chuckle. “ He’s stuck”
And they poke at me and form
a ring of eyes, above.
 
I am desperate for kindness now
I retract my neck and limbs
quiet as death until
bored the children
seeing no movement, right me
 
again, I stumble on,
until a foot with toes poised to flip
is stopped by words
I prayed for
defensive, kind
“Let the poor thing go.”
 
I hide in the cool leaves before my last
desperate lurch, pond water surges
over me, I swim, my legs paddle.
 
The water lilies are beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Maverick Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 10:23 PM
Well there was real turtle ..MAX..lol))) in Your turtle writed, who became delighted Suz.' Keep em coming girl.'
Volumes Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 4:09 AM
wow Suz I just found this. Its really incredible and so real. you did a wonderful job of not only making the turtle a victim, but we all rooted for him as a hero too. Great poem. Loved it
Delaney Avatar
July 20, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Thanks SV. So nice to have you visit. It is always so sad to me if I see cruelty to animals, no matter how small or large they are. We humans should know better. Cheers, SuZ
Baker Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Lovely imagery at the end, and the matching photo was a plus, SuZ. Thanks for sharing your "turtle" poem with us. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Delaney Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 11:50 AM
Hi Bill: So happy you enjoyed. I had this in a folder to post long ago but forgot but your poem prompted me to dig it out. Thanks much. SuZ
Ray Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 5:32 AM
speaks volumes about humanity....but in its defense, i have worked with a population of the caring....so this poem for me points to the reality with time they come to be illuminated....wonderful use of the turtle
Delaney Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 11:51 AM
I agree, Timray: If there is a spark of goodness it must be nurtured before it goes completely out. Best, SuZ
Merryman Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 7:25 PM
A wonderful poem from the perspective of a turtle! I enjoyed this creative write! Blessings, Kim M
Delaney Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 11:52 AM
How nice to have a visit from you Kim: Glad this little story tickled you. SuZ
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