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Turn of Grace

Sometimes, the shadows linger still despite my fervent plea I long for sun to captivate each thought without delay While in the gray of of silence awaiting turn of grace defenseless often is the eye to summon rainbow’s view Yet, beneath the clouds above I will not long remain For shadows always disappear when thoughts of light endure

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Date: 9/11/2021 7:51:00 PM
Profound thoughts, Mike... This weekend has brought your philosophical talents to the fore... May it bring more... Yet more sunny days too. Happy Sunday, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/12/2021 4:40:00 AM
Happy Saturday as well GW, thanks!
Date: 9/11/2021 11:46:00 AM
We're uplifted when the darkness and shadows disappear life becomes enjoyable once more when the brightness of the light soothes us. Well written Mike. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2021 5:21:00 PM
Thanks as always Tom!
Date: 9/11/2021 10:34:00 AM
Lovely write Mike..... For shadows always disappear when thoughts of light endure ...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2021 5:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Vijay!
Date: 9/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
so uplifting Mike, out of the darkness there is always light, i especially love that final stanza, Happy saturday:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Jan xxoo
Date: 9/11/2021 9:06:00 AM
Enjoyed your excellent poem on light and shadow, Mike. Excellent metaphor, too, for experiencing the good and the bad. I liked the line "defenseless often is the eye" very much. Good writing.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 9/11/2021 10:40:00 AM
I appreciate your kind words Milton, thanks

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