Turkey In a Tailspin

'Tis a twisted, tawdry tale !!
Poor Tom the Turkey is in a tizzy !!!
Tom's tongue is in a tangle, too terrified to talk !
Taunts and threats taking a toll
Tormented by a tip from tattle-tale townfolk
That Tom's in trouble!  Tom's time is ticking !!
Tom the Turkey so terribly tramautized !!
Trapped in terror....
Teary Tom is taking tranquilizers,
Tablespoons of tonics....
Trying to tame the tension and trepidation !
Tiptoeing through tall timber...
Trapezing through treetops !
Tongue-tied and tearfully trembling..
Taking tactics, trying not to tempt...
Those tyranical terriorists who torture and
Trace Tom's tracks...
Tom the turkey in a tailspin 
Told he's targeted for termination !!...
Tagged to be Thanksgiving treats and tidbits...
A tasty trophy topping Thanksgiving tables !!
This tale, this traversty, truely terrible !!
                TRAGIC !!!!


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Revised for Donna Golden's "Turkey Tribute Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Davis Avatar
September 1, 2010 at 8:13 AM
Very nice. Funny turkey tale :)
Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Excellent Alliteration Carrie, many congrats on your winning piece in Donna's contest >> James,x
George   Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 11:13 AM
What brilliant Alliteration, Carrie. Congratulations on your win in Donna's Contest. Also, I wish to thank you for your very kind comments - very much appreciated. Love, Lainie
Brown Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Congratulations on your win in Donna's Turkey Tribute contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 10:15 AM
This is so funny, Carrie, I love it! Congratulations on your success in Donna's contest. Great work! Love, Carolyn
Strand Avatar
November 22, 2009 at 8:43 AM
Congrats on your success in Donna's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Sweetheart Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 6:57 PM
Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in the turkey tribute contest... good job... may your holiday be as wonderful as your winning poem... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Golden Avatar
November 21, 2009 at 4:23 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your honorable mention in my Turkey Tribute Contest! Hugs, Donna
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
November 9, 2009 at 5:38 PM
Good luck in the contest. This was impressive. Vince
Brown Avatar
November 3, 2009 at 2:51 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest Carrie. Gobble Gobble Love, Carol
Nunn Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 4:50 PM
Good luck in the contest, this one should win it, old Tom he is not to get a blue ribbon...Thanks on the Willys Jeep,,lol sounds like you have had a mile or to in the buggy....I been a million in them...Thanks Danny
Mason Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 3:30 PM
LOL wonderful here Carrie !! Good luck in the contest ... you've got a winner here !! Thank you so much for all your recent comments ... it seems to take me forever to get back to folks ... there are too many people at the Soup ... LOL ... Hope you have a fun-filled Halloween and a wonderful Thanksgiving!!
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 3:11 PM
I know I'm in trouble.It's great.Good luck.Teresa
Ryerson Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 8:04 PM
Great work with the tee's , Carrie! I love aliteration...reminds me a bit of "Jabberwocky" by Lewis Carroll...one of my all-time favorites poems! - Tim
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October 30, 2009 at 1:25 PM
That is cute!! Poor old tom, you did good gietting all the t wourds in there.
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 11:58 AM
Love Alliteration. NIcely done. Keep writing. Sara
Moreno Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 11:10 AM
Excellent work, it all boils down to tragic and tasty...Raul
Strand Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 9:53 AM
Just to say Carrie I airmailed your prize this afternoon.Have a good weekend and thanks for your welcome comments.Rgds Brian
Sheart Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 9:47 AM
Carrie, Gets me to thinking....Very witty indeed! Good luck in contest. Love Light Truth Patty
Kelly Avatar
October 30, 2009 at 9:33 AM
Thanks ; you've got this down to a T .... Best of luck in the contest .....
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