Turiya

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Exiting stupor Unbroken knowing Till the deep sleep state Frees us from bondage Being self-aware Flicker free flame Self luminous With heart tranquil Is enlightened Turiya state Lofty goal Strive for it Hermit Awake Now 07-June-2021

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Judy Ball

Date: 6/7/2021 7:24:00 AM

I felt that way this morning after a deep sleep from exhaustion. My cat was insistent that I get up and feed her before she started on my toes. I staggard to the kitchen half asleep in a somnambulant journey to find sustenance for my starving kitty. Great write. Very clever. God Bless, JB

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/7/2021 5:33:00 AM

Your hermit has a bit of a job shaking you into consciousness.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/7/2021 7:05:00 AM

Search ... search ... search, Victor, for the person who remains aware through waking, dreaming & deep sleep!