Turiya

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Unbroken awareness spotless Radiant in the deep sleep state Expansion of our mind endless Whilst heart, to throb of love gyrates Shifting to the life internal Unbroken awareness spotless We reclaim Gods light eternal Depths of divine bliss bottomless Everlasting Gods grace boundless Alive in the continuum Unbroken awareness spotless Vibrant void our sensorium Infinite is our soul presence Our empowerment limitless Core essence self-luminescence Unbroken awareness spotless 04-June-2021 Writing prompt ‘endless’ poetry contest Sponsor: Constance La France Words to be incorporated: endless, everlasting, infinite, eternal boundless, limitless, bottomless, unbroken

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Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2021 12:32:00 PM

Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image, peace _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/19/2021 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Constance, for hosting your inspiring prompts contests!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 10:34:00 AM

I think I had already commented about it. It's a beautiful Peom. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/13/2021 9:45:00 PM

Thank you, Chris!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 2:01:00 PM

very clever write

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 7:39:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by, Jack!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2021 12:06:00 AM

Well done in using the selected words. Best for a win.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 12:14:00 AM

Of the eight words required, four end with ‘less’, prompting a poem format with rhyming refrain. Hence Quatern, which I find more challenging than Villanelle, for example.