Turiya

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Unbroken awareness spotless
Radiant in the deep sleep state
Expansion of our mind endless
Whilst heart, to throb of love gyrates

Shifting to the life internal
Unbroken awareness spotless
We reclaim Gods light eternal
Depths of divine bliss bottomless

Everlasting Gods grace boundless
Alive in the continuum 
Unbroken awareness spotless
Vibrant void our sensorium 

Infinite is our soul presence
Our empowerment limitless
Core essence self-luminescence 
Unbroken awareness spotless

04-June-2021

Writing prompt ‘endless’ poetry contest
Sponsor: Constance La France 

Words to be incorporated:

endless, everlasting, infinite, eternal
boundless, limitless, bottomless, unbroken

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Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2021 12:32:00 PM

Seeker, congratulations on your win in my Writing Prompt - Endless - Challenge with this wonderful poem and I love your image, peace _Constance

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/19/2021 5:53:00 PM

Thank you Constance, for hosting your inspiring prompts contests!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 6/13/2021 10:34:00 AM

I think I had already commented about it. It's a beautiful Peom. Congratulations!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/13/2021 9:45:00 PM

Thank you, Chris!

Jack Horne

Date: 6/4/2021 2:01:00 PM

very clever write

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 7:39:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by, Jack!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/4/2021 12:06:00 AM

Well done in using the selected words. Best for a win.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 6/4/2021 12:14:00 AM

Of the eight words required, four end with ‘less’, prompting a poem format with rhyming refrain. Hence Quatern, which I find more challenging than Villanelle, for example.