Tune the Violin

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Clouds looming over the cluster of twigs. Designed in a unique way. As a light breeze. The wind is blowing. Changes in fiddle and location are slight. Cumulus mists now have an alternative face. That both life and time are precious. Oft times, they defy logic and rhymes. Written: September 10, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/13/2021 1:15:00 AM

life is short and time so precious, we need to remember this...Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2021 2:10:00 AM

I loved this poem. Great imagery.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/10/2021 2:39:00 PM

Wonderfully lyrical poem in great imagery, Lasaad.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 9/10/2021 1:54:00 PM

Indeed, Lasaad, indeed. Your images are striking and, as you say, sometimes "defy logic and rhymes. Love it.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/10/2021 1:47:00 PM

I really like the next to the last line. We really don't know nor think about how precious our time here on earth is until something happens to remind us that it could be gone in an instant. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara