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Than-Bauk Variation Contest 9/3/24

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/23/2024 12:00:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:00:00 PM

Oh how cool . You were thinking like me with fall in the air. Big congrats, Lin

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2024 2:53:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lin. Enjoyed… now… where’s my leaf blower?

Lin Lane
Date: 9/20/2024 6:10:00 PM

Thanks, Terry. Be patient... let the wind blow them away and save yourself the trouble.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2024 10:30:00 PM

Dear Lin, this is beautiful, so well woven and delivered for the form. I love how picturesque it is: and i can see through those words, autumnal leaves falling and floating through the air! Its one of my fave seasons which we dont get here unfortunately. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Sending you light

Lin Lane
Date: 9/20/2024 2:09:00 AM

Thank you for enjoying this one enough to comment, ink. It’s appreciated.

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 9:55:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/20/2024 2:08:00 AM

Thank you, Thriveni.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:43:00 PM

Lovely! Congratulations, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 9/20/2024 2:07:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Kim.

Daniel Caplin

Date: 9/4/2024 3:44:00 AM

Hi Lin , your beautiful words of Autumn leaves tumbling from trees reminds me of butterflies in the shape of hearts floating in the breeze. Your words capture the image beautifully. Danny

Lin Lane
Date: 9/5/2024 2:23:00 PM

I can see how you relate their fluttering to butterflies, especially the orange ones that resemble Monarchs. Thank you for supporting my poetry, Danny.

Terry Flood

Date: 9/3/2024 4:12:00 PM

We have a massive cherry tree that blankets our entire lawn with red and orange leaves. Looks great, until I remember that the mice ate the bag off of my leaf sucker! Enjoyed, Lin.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/5/2024 2:22:00 PM

I don't like rodents of any kind! Thanks, Terry.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/3/2024 11:55:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Tumbling Leaves" write. A pretty fall picture. I cannot wait for the cooler weather. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.....................

Lin Lane
Date: 9/5/2024 2:21:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paula.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/3/2024 8:53:00 AM

Love to see them Lin, it's the sweeping up I'm not so keen on especially when it rains on them. I do love autumn though. Tom.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2024 10:22:00 AM

One good thing about apartment living, I don't have to rake the leaves. Thanks so much, Tom. I can't wait for temps to get under 90.

Chris Green

Date: 9/3/2024 8:42:00 AM

After all of the heat we have experienced here, autumn cannot come fast enough. Thanks for sharing a little piece of this wonderful season.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2024 10:21:00 AM

Being neighbors, we've probably had close to the same. Your temps may have been a titch higher, but the humidity here made up for that. Thanks for reading me and leaving your comments. Stay well, Chris.