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Tubby Triplet Troubles

Retaliatory Repercussions by Sean Kelly A young fertile mother begat Triplets, called Tim, Tom and Tat Great fun at breeding Confusion at feeding When she found there was no tit-for-tat ( Chosen because it made me laugh..Sean always does...) Tubby Triplet Trouble The triplets became very fat Except for the one called Tat He became very slim "Cause he went to the gym Tim and Tom thought him a brat The fat ones started to cry Thought about giving up pie When Tat found a girl And gave her a whirl Their cravings started to die For the Double Limerick contest...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 8:39:00 PM
congratulations, Barbara, and to me, you chose the best limerick here at Soup, that one of Sean's. I just love it!
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Date: 8/16/2010 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations to you Barbara on your win in John Freeman and Carolyn Devonshire's shared contest "Double Limerick Inspiration". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:00:00 PM
Great work Barbalra, Lcongratualtions. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/15/2010 6:04:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Barbara
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:57:00 PM
Congrats for your well deserved win, dear Barbara. Alll the best, Iolanda
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Date: 8/15/2010 4:22:00 PM
So cute, LNC. Congrats on your placement in the contest. John and I had different perspectives on the rankings, but I love your poem. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:04:00 PM
Well done, Barbara....such a cute poem!! It is so nice to share 2nd with your talent!! And thanks so much for your gracious loan on the poem you let me use!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2010 3:01:00 PM
Check your soup mail Barbara
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:44:00 PM
Thanks Barbara for the special effort, and congratulations your place, Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/15/2010 2:44:00 PM
Congrats BG on your big win in the Double Limerick contest with this great entry.. enjoy your special victory dance this happy Sunday..luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 7:31:00 PM
You have a nice limerick rhythm,Barbara. and I LOVE that limerick of SEan's that you chose to emulate. Funny how you had Tat going to work out a gym! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:40:00 PM
Barbara, you did solid work on this one and it is a great pick. But you expanded and expounded upon it nicely. Thank you as always, Gerard.
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Date: 8/7/2010 9:10:00 AM
cute one, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:59:00 AM
Super follow-up , Barbara and best of luck ...
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:52:00 AM
Great work, Barbara!! Thanks again for letting me use your Poor Fly poem for mine!!! Sean's limerick.. and yours are so funny!! Good luck!!
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Date: 8/7/2010 8:36:00 AM
Aces, LNC. I can't wait to see what Sean has to say. Love, Carolyn
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