Get Your Premium Membership

Tsunami Survivors Share Love (Cowritten With James Fraser)

My Carolyn and I, on Plymouth Hoe we stand To leave this shire of Devon, to far distant lands Our desire to leave, and this change in our lives There's a future out there, for me and my new wife As I look down on the harbour, at these ships of grand To be honoured and trusted, my voyage of command Tomorrow we sail, to the South Seas and beyond My crew and I, in dutiful naval respond Even before we set sail, a hurricane did brew At first we met calm seas, if only we knew For as we headed south, Atlantic waters churned Yet still my Highlander's passion in my heart burned A tsunami grew on the eastern horizon Would we reach our Caribbean island? The huge water mass approached and toppled our ship But James' strong arms ensured that we remained adrift Tossed and battered, in the midst of her rage Spewed onto the shore, our bodies and sands engage Weathered and ashen, we arise in the sun Deserted and beached, a new day has begun We view our surrounds, in search of a haven To collect our thoughts, now in survival craving It's been many weeks, as we have formed an alliance Our deserted island called home, in total compliance A thatched roof he has crafted, shelter from the storms On this palm-filled beach, two survivors are born My sweet Highlander climbs and shakes coconuts free He forages through jungles, brings meat to me I crafted a spear and have caught many a fish Whatever I cook, he says it's his favorite dish When falling sun brings colorful skies, we cuddle We embrace where nature's other creatures huddle It's been many many years, on this island of ours Living with nature, our most wonderful neighbours We awoke one morning, to see a ship offshore I turned to my Carolyn, with emotions galore Do we stay here in paradise, or leave for new lands It's what we intended, being deserted was not planned Our signals in tune, we declare to prepare What we have learnt here, the world needs to share

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/7/2017 1:20:00 AM
Adventure, though came out after disaster. Strong people make it wherever they are. Hard work and being practical do make life better!Congrats it's been featured. GL. :)l
Login to Reply
Date: 1/19/2011 7:11:00 AM
Beautiful write.Was it the Boxing day tsunami which hit India also?-kashinath
Login to Reply
Date: 10/7/2009 5:00:00 PM
I'm very impressed of your lines, Carolyn. Just had an email from a friend of mine living on Efate (Vanuatu). They had an earthquake of 7.8 Richer Scale and a Tsunami-warnig was given. I have been livin long enough in that area and can feel with the people there. Keep your good writing! Love, Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 10/1/2009 7:40:00 AM
Carolyn,.. I'm sure you've heard of the latest tradgic event. I knew I read a beautiful soft comfort some where once,..and I found it,..right here,..from you and Mr. Fraser. Would you two kind folks please do it again? Bravo once again for this one ! james
Login to Reply
Date: 9/16/2009 8:00:00 AM
I was captivated by this beautifully written story/poem. What an amazing collaboration! Smooth, flowing rhyme and brilliant images abound in such touching sentiment. Excellent work, Carolyn and James! Love, Robin
Login to Reply
Date: 8/24/2009 1:58:00 PM
(la,la,la,) Carolyn and James, sitting by the Sea!!! K-i-s-s-i-n-g (la,la,la) Okay you two, I just couldn't help myself... The POEM made me do it. LOL It's just that it is so romantic and the two of you together have such great imaginations. Your writing styles are similar and any differences work to compliment one another. (Married this time... Huh, James... just kidding LOL) You know, there's a consensus here. You two simply must write a book together. I get the 3rd copy. Love you, Dane
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2009 5:58:00 PM
Carolyn and James,....this write is so wonderful,..dreamy,..and the declaration to share is wonderful,..not only in the last two lines, but through out this poem ! Bravo to you both ! james
Login to Reply
Date: 8/15/2009 12:16:00 PM
A brilliant performance in this~Co-authored (flim) Carolyn, lol, God bless, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 8/15/2009 10:36:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this, Calolyn! Having lived on some South Sea Islands, I felt just the same. Thanks for your comment on "The Beggar". Love, Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 8/15/2009 2:11:00 AM
Wow Caroline & James I agree with Barbara its like reading a book we are all in the story with you. Great read. God Bless. Leon
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2009 5:23:00 PM
You two have got it "going on"..Its like reading a book..page turner. You two should think about that..co-author a book. Many late night revisions? smile. No I havent heard a word.I did talk with Ruben and he also thought the poem was a cry for help. Wait..its hard. Love, BG
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2009 4:32:00 PM
No Tsunami can drown the depths of feelings and emotions-survivors forever more--awesome-you two are so good--charma
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2009 3:17:00 PM
Loved it because of the message and myself I have the gift of rhyme, you are very very good, So keep up the excellent wok, Look forward to reading more' Robert Ball
Login to Reply
Date: 8/14/2009 3:13:00 PM
Carolyn, thank you so much for this wonderful opportunity to share our similar thoughts again. We do have a knack for co-writing and this Highlander is over the moon for being involved with such a super writer and poet as yourself, lots of love James,xx
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things