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Try Not To Look

A backwards glance. Subtle? Absolutely not, but paranoia has been steadily rising. The footsteps are Running behind me now, closer and closer. Loud, in a ferocious Way. Am I going to get knocked down? Kicked? Accosted? I jump off the sidewalk, turn and glare at a young man in blue jeans who grins at me, giving me a thumbs up sign as he races past. Grateful the old woman had gotten out of his way, I am the one with wet tennis shoes, not him. A whole new perspective, Relaxing now, I stop clutching My purse.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/15/2018 11:28:00 PM
Perspective is everything! Like the way you built the tension up then let it back down. Nice write!
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Rhona Mcferran
Date: 9/16/2018 2:08:00 PM
I know that process well! lol
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/16/2018 6:41:00 AM
This was one of those re-writes that started out twice as long and was chopped down to the basics. Thanks Rhona.

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