Truths Unspoken

Born of glaciers, rivers flow,
turquoise ice and untouched snow,
deep green valleys far below,
ancient stands of hardwoods grow.

Icy rivers running deep,
through the mountain's midnight sleep,
darkened waters crest and leap,
earthbound secrets rivers keep.

Stoically the mountains stand,
nurturing the age-old land,
born before mere time began,
when Earth was pure, devoid of man.

River rocks were once rough stone,
water-smoothed, by eons honed,
each grain of sand is sand alone,
truths unspoken lie unknown. 

Listen to the waters speak,
every river, ocean, creek,
there lie answers all must seek,
flowing from the mountain's peak.

©copyright2009DanielleWhite
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Gorelick Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 7:30 AM
This was sure to win..congrats on a most lovely poem. BG
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January 22, 2010 at 12:39 PM
congrats on the win!!
Owens Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 6:44 PM
Congratulations on your First place win...Wonderful poem...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Congrats on your first place win Danielle.. well deserved ..well written.. luv.. Linda-Marie
Fraser Avatar
January 16, 2010 at 9:27 AM
Danielle, many congratulations on your win in Brian's fine contest >> James
Augustus Avatar
January 14, 2010 at 12:31 PM
The "flow" of your poem is really nice. Congratulations on your first place finish!
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January 14, 2010 at 5:25 AM
Danielle, Your marvelous poem encompasses everything about a river: beauty, history, function, environment... all painting a beautiful river through words. No wonder you won first place. Congratulations, Dane Ann
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 11:47 PM
This is really beautiful Danielle. Congratulations on winning. Connie
Sepulvado Anderson Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 10:03 AM
How beautiful and visually pleasing. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day! Scarlett
Dietrich Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:19 PM
A deserved win!! Congratulations!! andrea
Dufresne Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 4:29 PM
congratulations on your first place win! Awesome!
Witt-King Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 2:29 PM
Such beautiful imagery, Danielle, with a profound undercurrent of symbolism. Your first place award in this contest is well-deserved. And it gives us who have yet to read yours a starting place for diving in. Congratulations!
Haick Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Exceptional poem, Danielle! Congratulations on your Ist place win in the contest! Great write, indeed! Goes to my favs! Peace, Audrey
Richards Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 9:09 AM
Hooray for you, Danielle with this number one winning poem!!! Congratulations! ~ Love, Carrie
Johnson Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 7:08 AM
Your rhyme is spectacular and the poem lovely. Congratulations on your well deserved first in the contest. Love, Joyce
George   Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 1:02 AM
Dear Danielle, This is a magnificent poem and so deserving its First Place Win. CONGRATULATIONS! The Last stanza is amazing. Thank you for sharing your amazing talent once again. Love, Lainie
Foster Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 12:37 AM
Congratulations on this fabulous work. A worthy winner in Brian's contest. cheers Margaret
Strand Avatar
January 12, 2010 at 12:22 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Danielle.Rgds Brian.If you care to souplmail me a forwarding address I'll airmail your prize.My latest contest RHYME TIME is now open.
Strand Avatar
January 8, 2010 at 12:03 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Danielle.Rgds Brian
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Best of luck with your poems on the next round...Raul
Brown Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:25 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Danielle. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
February 25, 2009 at 6:06 PM
Danielle - Wonderful rhyme and flow made the message of this poem even more enjoyable if that is possible - outstanding - I just want to say congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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February 24, 2009 at 6:54 AM
Congrats Danielle on the featuring of your poem "Truths Unbroken." Have a wonderful liberal day. Vince
Winter Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Awesome rhyme and flow with amazing imagery. Warmest congrats on a beautiful featured write. Love, Shar
Austin Avatar
February 23, 2009 at 7:36 AM
This would go well with Zen...the peace....sublimity...otherselfness. Congrats on this fine selection. Love, daver
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