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Truth Or Dare

Can you walk with me? Hold my hand through the seasons Smell the sweet flowers, dip in rivers, Lay beneath twinkling stars, follow the moon Sing a happy tune with me and the birds Swing on the bench swing arm and arm All we need is each other in the moment Let’s dance in the shining sunbeams we share Let’s laugh and play truth or dare Walk with me to the edge of the cliff Let’s look at life below, as if we left it In our own special place, with our love to be Can you pack your love and walk with me? Heidi Sands 1/22/19

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Date: 1/23/2019 4:44:00 PM
your style is definitely breezy and breathless.. keep that charm, heidi... love is joy!...huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much Nette. Yes, love is joy! I hope you are having a great day :)
Date: 1/23/2019 8:43:00 AM
This is a "feel good" write - and for me, brings to mind the Pina Colada Song - happy and hopeful is always good!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 8:49:00 AM
Thank you. That is nice to hear! I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 1/23/2019 7:33:00 AM
This is so charming and beautiful..as inviting a poem as happy life should be..you wrote bouncing words, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment Vijay. I like to hear bouncing lol. That's good :) Have a great day!
Date: 1/23/2019 4:17:00 AM
Two becoming one, well written romantic verse Heidi. Greetings from Ireland. Tom.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 7:58:00 AM
Hi Tom. Thank you very much :)
Date: 1/23/2019 3:32:00 AM
Hi Heidi, a beautiful write. Such wonderful visions your words do create. Take my hand and come with me on a walk in the stars. I think there are many who would want to walk with you Heidi. The only place I am wary of is the cliff. Having Vertigo, that is never a good idea. I love the content of this write. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 7:59:00 AM
Thank you Mike. Ohhh...the cliff is not a good idea with the vertigo. You are right. I appreciate your comment on this. Have a great day :)
Date: 1/22/2019 8:32:00 PM
oh, Heidi this is beautiful... the universal love and beauty that we mere mortals experience...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/22/2019 8:34:00 PM
Thank you P.S. It is nice to see your comment :)

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