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Trust Me - Tanka

Dejected in love I act in defiance of, yet face the music Why not look into my face, Embrace panoptic passion ! One tanka - 5/7/5/7/7 Written on 19/4/14 Sponsor- Amy green Now for contest ' Just one Tanka- old and new' by Alfred Vassallo Entered on August 28th, 2014

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/29/2014 2:41:00 PM

Dear Dr. Upma, You have quite a talent for creating a mood with your words. You will now join my favorite poets. I can relate to these words. Congratulations on your win! Best Wishes, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2014 11:13:00 AM

Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/27/2014 7:43:00 PM

I learned a new word. congratulations on a great tanka. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2014 7:15:00 PM

aha, there you are again, on the winners' list!! Congrats to you, dear.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/27/2014 7:36:00 AM

A brilliant piece made you win, congrats, Dr. Upma

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/27/2014 7:53:00 AM

Thnx Dr Ram !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2014 1:56:00 AM

Dr Umpa, awesome, winning tanka.... congrats on your super win. ... xox~ LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/27/2014 7:52:00 AM

Thnx Linda !

Paul Callus

Date: 4/24/2014 8:44:00 AM

Love that "panoptic passion" ... nothing hidden; sort of 'you get what you see!' no hidden agenda. gl in contest. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 4/25/2014 4:37:00 AM

I like it when I get a further explanation from the author...writers like feedback, but so do the readers! Txs DR.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 10:31:00 PM

Panoptic passion - i meant my passion is so visible n evident all around everywhere, i was ensuring my beloved who still was dejecting me, to believe in me ,,,, so i said open up eyes of ur mind boy,, why cant u see its so very visible ,, n once u see , u shud rather embrace,,,,,,, So happy to hv ur kind comments, cud not resist replying again, i love to elaborate Paul !

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2014 9:09:00 AM

Pleasure it did fascinate u,,,thanks Paul,,,appreciate ur kind words n wishes,,thnx----/Upma/

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2014 5:56:00 PM

Seeing the WHOLE you!! Thanks for getting me to look up my new word for the day: panoptic!! good luck in the contest!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:52:00 AM

thanks Andrea,,, lovely comments,,, thanks for wishes too,,,,,/upma/

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2014 5:28:00 PM

Reads like winning material to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the viisit to my page with congrats..Sara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 4/23/2014 5:53:00 AM

Sara thanks a lot for the like n the wishes,,, lovely comments,,,/upma/