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A mother holds her infant to her breast, snuggled safely; its fears are laid to rest. A primal link bonds a mother and child, a sharing of hearts, instinctive and wild. A soldier huddles in the stench of death determined to fight to his final breath. For lives count on his bravery today, and despite his fears, he's resigned to stay. A dad encourages his toddler son, holding his hands as that first step is won. And with arms outstretched, he coaches him on as he stumbles forth, inhibitions gone. A virgin bride feeling anxious inside approaches temptations she's long denied. And yet, in bed, she surrenders her will to her husband and love's intimate thrill. A common thread stitches these souls in place, a natural bond time cannot erase. Believe what you will; and think what you must, but the human soul has evolved on trust. (Rhyme) 8/27/2017

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Date: 5/25/2018 7:53:00 PM
A fine tribute to Trust, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2018 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much Line, your comments are much appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2017 8:57:00 PM
Emile, what a gorgeous poem in content, imagery, rhythm and rhyme. I totally enjoyed every beautiful line, it was a complete pleasure for me to read tonight. Congratulations on your fine placement my friend!
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Date: 9/3/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thanks so much Susan, it's good to hear from you, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2017 8:03:00 PM
Oh Emile! This is fantastic! Well thought out and so well written. A FAV for me sir!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Dean, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2017 6:45:00 PM
Excellent choices for rhyming, Emile, along with a message on trust. Faith strengthens us to be trusting.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2017 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Lin, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2017 5:49:00 PM
So beautiful--so well written--love the theme!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2017 5:34:00 PM
What an excellent poem with various scenarios. I enjoyed this Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2017 5:29:00 PM
This is stunning writing Emile, so true and well said, our human existence from beginning to end relies on trust, in the end we trust God will do what's right!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/27/2017 6:10:00 PM
Thanks so much John, it's good to hear from you again, as always I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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