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True Love Waits

BETRAYED You waited for an opportunity to leave me, my love could not make you stay, You always loved not me, but vanity, Pleasures of this world beckoned you away; You broke my heart when you purposed to go, I did not wish to hinder your freedom, Unspoken words - "Don't go, I love you so", You did not understand I had gone dumb; Although entitled to all luxury, You could never see that all mine was yours, Now, haunting ever is your memory, The pain you have given is beyond cures; You could have enjoyed my love, had you stayed, But now, my dear, yourself you have betrayed. --------------03.10.16-------------- TRUE LOVE WAITS Still I have the hope, you'll come back one day, For after all, this is your own sweet home, I'm looking for you, though you're far away in a different land eager to roam; I've been shedding tears, ever since you moved, Crying for you in that far, lonely land, Won't you turn your feet back? Have I not proved my love for you? I wish you'd understand; You threw away my love and my living, Not deserving forgiveness, still I'm kind, Love's not about receiving but giving, That's why I'd like to tenderly remind; With open arms, as long as I'm alive, I shall wait for you, my dear, to arrive. -------------17.10.16------------- (English Sonnet)
(Largely inspired by Len Magee's song titled "The Prodigal")

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Date: 6/13/2017 12:38:00 PM
A very sad but beautiful poem, it s true that when someoje you truly loves left you na, your life became hell, it seems like your purpose of living is ended, some say that time help you get heal but in reality it reminds you all the moments making you even more sadder however I m new on this site and have poem of similar category, I shall never see you again and I would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 1/19/2017 11:57:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations for you :)
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:44:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Jo
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Date: 1/19/2017 8:28:00 PM
I loved it, Jo! I'm not familiar with the song you referenced but I intend to check it out - it must be good if it inspired such a lovely piece. Great rhymes and excellent content within the form made this an easy poem to read multiple times. Thank you for the submission and congratulations on your placement
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 1/20/2017 5:43:00 AM
Thank you very much, Phillip:) I'm honoured, all glory be to God alone:) the song in fact is about the prodigal son of the Bible, whose father waits for him with love to come back:)
Date: 10/25/2016 3:43:00 AM
I love your sonnets! Forgiving sounds so easy while it is not :)
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Date: 10/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
Jo, you really did a great job with your double sonnet. Exactly what he wanted from us. Hope you SCORE!!! Thanks for reading my latest poetry and for your lovely soupmail.
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Date: 10/18/2016 8:04:00 AM
A great deal of work went into this one..I enjoyed reading them both..If for a contest, reads like winning material..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 10/18/2016 5:40:00 AM
- Jo, this is impressive - Really beautiful and touching both of them - A crystal clear 7 !!! - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2016 1:17:00 AM
This is so difficult but you did it extra-ordinarily well my dear friend! A super 7 from me! Best wishes in the contest! love lots and hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:40:00 AM
This is really good Jo. A difficult task to accomplish.
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:37:00 AM
Well done, Jo! A very tough challenge which you have answered beautifully. Good luck:)
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Date: 10/17/2016 10:23:00 AM
Two sadly beautiful poems. I can definitely relate to the second one. I wish I didn't, I wish I could just say what your first poem ends with, but I can't. The love on my side is just too strong. Really nice Jo.
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