True Love Never Dies

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Such is the innocent heart struck down Giving it to you Rich feast On a platter Ugly I feel within Simply to feel the warmest beauty Insides turn over butterflies Exploring on angel wings Fluttering beats striking Slipping away Into cotton white clouds with a pearly silver lining treasure gift colors Lost in this world alone broken sometimes sad The smallest act of love Changes to overwhelming beautiful seeing such an amazing heart soft kiss lifting to heaven Innocence lies within the wings Thank you for sharing angel precious moments Because each memory will last a lifetime touches so deeply Words are lost in the space of a window time stands still So I wrote them down in your soul rainbow speaking view darling

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/5/2016 6:37:00 AM

'...so I wrote them down in your soul,' a fabulous phrase. A well constructed TERZA RIMA, with fantastic imagery and gentle phrasing. BRAVO my friend! Keith

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/29/2015 9:42:00 PM

I dont know if if you play Golf, but if Poetry was Golf, you would have to give me a handicap! Simply beautiful love poem! A7

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/29/2015 2:42:00 PM

affection overflows with such charm, liam.. happy new year!..huggs

Kim Van Breda

Date: 12/29/2015 11:24:00 AM

A perfectly beautiful soft and lilting write Liam.. the last two stanza's are awesome #7 ~~X~~

Punnia Viswan Bhatia

Date: 12/29/2015 6:01:00 AM

So I wrote them down in your soul rainbow speaking view darling..extraordinary....a 7

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/29/2015 2:27:00 AM

- Beautiful written, dear Liam - "Thank you for sharing angel precious moments" ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/28/2015 6:09:00 PM

I really hope that you and your dear family had a very wonderful Christmas time,Liam.I wish you and your very dear family a Very Happy n' Prosperous New Year 2016 filled with lots of love, happiness, joy, health and peace!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/28/2015 5:33:00 PM

Hi Liam! Wow! Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I truly enjoy it! A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away,enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I love it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful! Excellent imagery!Outstanding.Just perfect!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray that you're okay in everything, Liam.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/28/2015 5:30:00 PM

Beautiful poem Liam, I really like the second verse, something that can be so true but we dont often express in a love poem! Great write.