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True Love

There is an old man and woman made of wood, who sit in the crook of the maple tree just outside my window. They hold a plastic pale in their lap that I fill with black oil sunflower seeds for the neighborhood birds. That couple has been together for so many years, I have lost count. They still smile at each other all day and all night too. They smile in the pouring rain and when the frigid snow piles high on top of their heads. I’m sure that they will be quietly smiling long after I am Dead. With you by my side we can weather any storm love will keep us warm

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Date: 1/25/2024 10:52:00 AM
Oh Jerry how very lovely….l found a comfort in your poem! those two share an unconditional love come what may, rain or shine they keep smiling at each other….true wooden love!! Haha..Debx
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Date: 1/23/2024 5:49:00 PM
Love the imagery and the romantic link!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:50:00 PM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 1/23/2024 5:57:00 AM
sincerely liked your Haibun, Jerry. Your description of the loving couple touched my heart. The Haiku at the end resonated with me, for it reminds me of hubby Bill and I. Am faving...enjoy your day, Sara
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:50:00 PM
So appreciative of the fav, my friend.
Date: 1/22/2024 6:50:00 PM
You have tapped the source of all motivation and positive energy, Jerry. Huzzah!
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:49:00 PM
Thanks Gershon.
Date: 1/22/2024 10:57:00 AM
Sweet haibun. I love reading about love like this that stays together and weather any storm together. Love is an antidote, a tranquilliser, and i do too admire such couples. Pleasure reading this
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Ink Empress, I appreciate you visiting and leaving such a beautiful comment.
Date: 1/22/2024 10:23:00 AM
Now that sounds like true love and its always good to have a uplifting spirit smiling all the time.. if they are old, they will probably die before you lol.. nicely done Jerry..
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:47:00 PM
They had to have some repairs done this year. Wouldn't that be nice, if we could just go in once a year for a new paint job?
Date: 1/22/2024 10:19:00 AM
- No wonder they are smiling ... they have found true love, Jerry :) - In good and bad days :) - hugs
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Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/23/2024 5:45:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise for dropping by.

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