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Monorhyme Contest Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton He was a venerable man awaiting his true destination, mysterious at night, but in the morn’ full of inspiration, he spoke of good fortune and tranquility with fascination, every day at noon the town listened with anticipation, shouted out his decree there’d be an investigation, many were shocked for they had absolutely no inclination, apparently some dwellers were protesting his abdication, most of them understood this is a difficult situation, so within the silvin territory many faced elimination, see, he was ancient and immortal before this creation, no one dared to ask his age, there’d be no explanation, he was a venerable man awaiting his true destination. Date Written: May 7, 2016

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Date: 5/22/2016 9:39:00 AM
Laura: Congrats on your win.
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Lu Loo
Date: 5/22/2016 12:11:00 PM
thank you Rob :)-luloo
Date: 5/22/2016 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:10:00 PM
thank you BL :)-luloo
Date: 5/22/2016 2:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Laura. ~kc~
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:10:00 PM
thank you Karam :)-luloo
Date: 5/21/2016 9:57:00 PM
Congratulations with your win, Laura, I love your write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:09:00 PM
thank you Eve :)-luloo
Date: 5/21/2016 6:40:00 PM
Lovely poem, Luloo. Congratulations on your fine win in this Premiere Contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:08:00 PM
thank you sweet Sandra! :)-luloo
Date: 5/21/2016 5:55:00 PM
Such a cool poem! ...no one dared ask, true destination. Congratulations, Laura!
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:07:00 PM
thank you Kim :)-luloo
Date: 5/21/2016 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Laura! I enjoyed your take on this contest! ; )
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Date: 5/22/2016 12:06:00 PM
thank you Connie :)-luloo
Date: 5/7/2016 6:19:00 PM
Nicely done, Laura. I think this is one I better hurry and get going on! You are on a roll, always coming up with great entries for the challenges.
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Date: 5/7/2016 6:34:00 PM
thank you Andrea, you're very sweet :)-luloo