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Tropical Seahorses

How mysteriously mythical And mystical you look Magnificently minute Maritime majestic migrants More than marginally manic Mesmerizing meanderers Masterpieces Peacefully going about Your business Magical make-believe Monarchs of the sea Upright and elegant In your mannerly march Moonstruck prone to Misfortunes and misadventures Oft mostly monologuing In monotonous monotony Mediocrely misconstruing Mischievous mongrels And misconceiving misplayed Merciless minutiae But merry merciful Momentous messengers of love Marketable motive and Mission to mirthfully mate You mavericks matched To mettlesome mistresses Masqueraded maroon From menacing mercenaries Marvelously masterful Is your mimed courtship dance Mellifluous entwining Matrimonial love embraces Mounting and moving Mimicking moody miscreance Swaying to measureless Maudlin melancholic melodies Monopolizing methodical Momentum and motion A meticulously modulated Mellow match of merging A most memorable metaphysical Millennium melodrama AP: 1st place 2022, Honorable Mention 2022, Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on April 16, 2018 for contest SEAHORSES sponsored by JULIA WARD - RANKED 5TH

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Gary Smith

Date: 5/9/2018 4:47:00 PM

Congrats Line, a great fun read :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thanks, Gary. Much appreciated.

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/9/2018 8:52:00 AM

And congrats to you , Line on your alluring alliteration allegory !!! Well done

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you so much, Mike.

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/9/2018 8:29:00 AM

Back to congratulate you, Line, on your fine placement in the contest! Magnificent! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 6:38:00 PM

Much appreciated, Sandra.

Joseph May

Date: 5/9/2018 4:10:00 AM

The M & M's were great...Congrats on your win

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2018 6:12:00 AM

LOL what a sweet comment, Joseph.

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/8/2018 10:12:00 PM

Omg! Stunningly mmmindblowing!! Congratulations on your win. A clever and fun seahorse poem. Well done!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 10:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/8/2018 7:22:00 PM

Marvelous alteration poem, line, congratulations on this wonderful write.. Hugs

Janis Thompson

Date: 5/8/2018 5:53:00 PM

Congrats on your placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 10:20:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sian.

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/8/2018 5:34:00 PM

This was more fun than a merry-go-ground while navigating through the letter "M" !!! Congrats to you !!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/8/2018 10:20:00 PM

LOL Thank you very much, Carrie. Most appreciated.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/26/2018 7:27:00 PM

This was fun to read. I bet it took a long time to compose.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/26/2018 10:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for your visit and comment, Juliet. This poem got away on me, I didn't mean for it to end up so heavy. It was a fun poem to write.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/21/2018 12:11:00 AM

Ma Ma Ma Magnificent! I love LOVE words!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/21/2018 12:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/19/2018 8:58:00 PM

MMMMMMMMMum's the word !! And you've used them all !! LOL !! This is aMMMMazing !!!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/19/2018 9:01:00 PM

LOL - Thanks, Carrie. Much appreciated visit and comment.

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/18/2018 4:53:00 PM

Wow, Line, what an amazing example of alliteration to the max! Your poem enhances the mythical, mystical and magical qualities of the mesmerizing seahorses! Love it, and all the best for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 6:47:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandra. most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/18/2018 6:22:00 AM

Methinks miraculous merry Melodiously muse-inspired magnificence must made missive Miss-Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/18/2018 10:18:00 AM

Lovely, I've always wanted a poem in my honour. LOL Thanks, Caren.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2018 3:58:00 PM

OMG, So much alliteration. It's mind-boggling!! I can tell you put a lot of work into this one. I know because I have done this kind of thing a few times myself. I think you did it better than I ever did!! good luck in the contest. Hope to read more of you later today. I kind of got sidetracked noticing a contest I needed to enter with an older poem!! bye now, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 4:03:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I surprised myself at the outcome of this one. I would have envisioned a little light airy poem! LOL

Robertina B.

Date: 4/16/2018 10:10:00 AM

A masterpiece Line!!! Your poem had me mesmerized!!! Enjoyed reading...

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 2:41:00 PM

You are too kind, Robertina. Thank you so much.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/16/2018 9:15:00 AM

To borrow some of your words - mesmerizing and magnificent!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 10:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, Michelle. Very appreciated.