Triple Time

Time’s scorched peach, spread syrupy soft
rolling thick then thin its umber, gossamer
Inside a dome gone silent, beating bacchii
pulsated a slow awakening like oozing sap
lazily rolling as a veil unfurls its edged curl
Elongating silken strands, etching in drape…

Time lays on rocky curves and water’s flat
Its lurid rays painless, whisper “Shh, it’s I!”
Mesmerized, all still to be charred in “Om”
Eventide then swallows silhouettes, whole…

(5/18/23)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Turner Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Reads like sunset to me, Susan. Great to read you again. Hoping you are well:)
Woodrow Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 12:01 PM
Hi Daniel… good to see you! that’s right -one I remember from a particular Camping weekend :) thank you… just fighting a migraine for a few days now it is getting tiresome … not so painful but enough to be bothersome! :)
Anaya Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 7:00 PM
Silky filigree perhaps by a body of water, reincarnated. Your signature poetry is born again. :)
Woodrow Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 3:30 PM
It’s whatever you perceive it to be :))
Anaya Avatar
May 20, 2023 at 9:36 AM
Aha! Why didn't I see that, my bad. A deep setting indeed! Susan, feel better soon. ;)
Woodrow Avatar
May 18, 2023 at 7:50 PM
Hi Anaya, I’m having an off sort of day so some poetry was needed to lift out of the funk :)
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