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Triple Prompt- Hear the Calling

I Hear The Call Of The Wild I hear the call of the wild. Once again gear on my journey Through the dark dense jungles. Exploring the flora and fauna In the wilderness of the parks Of the nations densest grounds. My bones do ache with Unwanted long peaceful rests. Families at times a burdensome affair. The heart remains buried under Cumbersome affairs. A life of freedom with the wild Ensnaring and escaping From getting ensnared. Life with roughest and crudest Challenges to exploit. An itching foot to traverse The untrodden dangers Of the virgin forests. I the master of my life The power in my fist The earth under my foot. I hear the call of the wild No strain no restrain. Balveen Cheema October 19, 2015 Contest: Triple Prompt-Hear The Calling Contest:Casarah Nance

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Date: 10/24/2015 2:18:00 PM
I really loved this poem! Hope you do well in the contest! P.S: I entered this one two! Any tips on how to get better would be most appreciated. Mine is called Call Of The Wild! I really do think you did amazing!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/24/2015 2:38:00 PM
Paige, there are no such rules. Just follow your heart! Sometimes, it works, sometimes not. It all depends on how the sponsor accepts it. Thanks for visiting my page! Love, Balveen
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Paige Clinton
Date: 10/24/2015 2:18:00 PM
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Date: 10/24/2015 1:35:00 PM
Thanks for sharing and good luck. If people were like coals in a fire, the coals that are the warmest are the one's huddled together sharing their heat. Pacing yourself with the burden you will find love...When your journey is your's alone, Rock On!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/24/2015 3:41:00 PM
Aww Edward! Its just a work of fiction! I value family ties and don't believe in too much of freedom! Thanks for your good wishes and catch up on your sleep! Reagards, Balveen
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 10/24/2015 3:13:00 PM
I was without sleep, so please forgive me. Poems bring out emotions within me just like sad songs sometimes make me cry...kind of silly. It was a reference to life and memories your poem triggered within me...that is all. Good Luck my friend :) BTW, my sisters called me "Edweird" when I was growing up because my thoughts were different ~ Peace
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 10/24/2015 2:34:00 PM
Thanks for reading my poem! But forgive me, was this reference for this poem or the one on 'peace not war'?

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