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Trip To a Concert

Went to see Willie Colon the other night Trombone - bongos - sexy woman dancing around A politician walked through the crowd Free water (I got there too late) rhythmic memories remain with us As old newspapers blow by in the wind We watch the dance of love and life as it repeats itself endlessly throughout the years echoing in the halls of our souls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/9/2008 4:33:00 PM
So much depth in this concise poem. I like the artistic format. Good last line! Well done. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Karen
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Date: 10/14/2008 6:56:00 PM
haunting chilling memories i felt. wonderful words. thank you for your comment on poem. Lena
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Date: 9/9/2008 2:02:00 PM
Good one Matthew, love how you ended this one. Well done. Regards Heidie
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Date: 9/9/2008 5:55:00 AM
Wow. Sounds awesome. Beautiful write! Love, Shar
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Date: 9/9/2008 3:36:00 AM
LOVE that last line, that sounds like a very cool experience indeed. :) Love Kristin
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Date: 9/8/2008 10:47:00 PM
Matthew - Sounds like a great time - also sounds like it triggered some deep contemplation - God bless
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