Tribute To Carolyn

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Poem composed: August 15/21
For: Constance La France
Contest: Tributes to Carolyn

she had a gift, a gleam
        her poetry that scanned like autobiography 
measured verses that re-made her life
                                        reborn
in experiences with a fuchsia sheen
a lamp that sometimes shifted in its blue light
                     sometimes to quilted hues

her day to day hopes of recovery
       when survival was everything
a wish, communal, that everything would turn out alright
but something cellular, inside, worked against her

sometimes death evades comprehension 
                      we can't interrogate it
but the camera swings away till it finds her words
                       that are a testimony of someone
                       shimmering

a poet who flourished in our world
                     because of what we all share
a life that's not small
                     it lingers
                     in words
                     that matter, that stand
                     and bring you to a standstill
                     s t i I l

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/21/2024 9:29:00 PM
Let's raise our glass to Carolyn. I'll bet she sends hugs from heaven.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/21/2024 9:34:00 PM
True, Marikate. I am sure there are warm hugs, celestial born this very moment. Grab one from Carolyn + have a grand night. Thank you for your visit to my tribute poem. Be well. Brian
Date: 2/5/2022 5:27:00 AM
A fine tribute to a wonderful Lady, Brian!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 2/5/2022 6:50:00 AM
Thanks very much, James, for your positive response to my small tribute. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 10/18/2021 9:05:00 AM
A beautiful tribute to Carolyn..... her legacy lives on~ Blessings, Paulette
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/18/2021 1:06:00 PM
Your thoughtful comments are most appreciated. Indeed, Carol's legacy (in her fine poetry) continues. All the best, Brian
Date: 8/23/2021 11:19:00 AM
Brian, thank you for taking part in the Tributes To Carolyn, your poem is wonderful ~ Constance
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/23/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thanks very much Constance, for your kind acknowledgement. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 8/19/2021 5:34:00 AM
A poem who flourished in our world - Beautiful.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/19/2021 6:11:00 AM
Greetings Christuraj, I appreciate your supportive note. All the best, Brian
Date: 8/19/2021 4:32:00 AM
Thanks so much for sharing this, enabling me to know more intimately Carolyn (though I will surely miss her and her uplifting comments). God bless you.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/19/2021 6:10:00 AM
Hello Beata, Thank you for reading my small tribute + for leaving such kind remarks. Hope that you are well. Sincerely, Brian
Date: 8/18/2021 6:13:00 PM
A great tribute to Carolyn, Brian, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Hugs Eve
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/18/2021 6:37:00 PM
Thank you, Eve. Very thoughtful of you to comment on my tribute to Carolyn. She left a few encouraging notes beneath my poems which I much appreciated. A gracious lady, a fine poet indeed. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 8/18/2021 2:52:00 PM
I'm really enjoying reading the tribute poems to our lovely friend, thanks for sharing, Many congrats on your win James:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/18/2021 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. I appreciate your stop by + thoughtful comment. Be well. Brian
Date: 8/15/2021 6:25:00 PM
I love your tribute style - if only we could interrogate death; it would die of exhaustion! :)
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/15/2021 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Susan. Your supportive words make my day. Best wishes, Brian
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