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This was written about a toddler who was snatched and killed by an alligator at  a Disney World hotel in Orlando, FL.

Sleep, little one, sleep, as those who love you weep. Your time on earth is sadly through; tragic, you were only two. Under mommy and daddy's watchful eyes, a beast of enormous size, attacked, snatched you lighting fast. Your daddy tried to grab you but you slipped past. The beast was just too strong, and he held you down too long, beneath the placid lagoon, where you died too soon, too soon. Your mommy and daddy are shocked and broken, numb as condolences are spoken. Their lives will never be the same, each one taking on the blame. Sleep, little one, sleep, as those who love you weep. In the arms of Jesus you now lie, while the angels sing a lullaby. 6/15/16 Entered in Laura Loo's "Best Sad Poem Ever" contest

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Date: 9/3/2016 5:01:00 AM
I remember this excelent moving piece Kim. Congrats on your second placement! I was watching the news about the hurricane hitting Florida tonight and hoping you and yours are safe. We seemed to have dodged a bullet here in Hawaii with our two hurricanes. One went south and the other north of our islands. Blessings, Connie ; ) 7
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:34:00 PM
Thank you, Connie! Glad to know the hurricanes missed you. Florida's hurricane missed our part of the panhandlers, too.
Date: 8/30/2016 9:57:00 PM
Well done. Horribly sad. Tremendous job
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:32:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly!
Date: 8/29/2016 1:28:00 PM
Hi Kim, I remember hearing about this little boy on the news. It was so sad and devastating. This was a heartfelt tribute piece. Congratulations on your winning write. It was deserved: -) Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis!
Date: 8/29/2016 12:26:00 PM
To lose a child...Congratulations on your win Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, Charlie!
Date: 8/29/2016 11:22:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim. That was a heartbreaking story, and you made it into a beautiful poem.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes. It was a very tragic event.
Date: 8/29/2016 10:09:00 AM
Kim, when I heard the news about this it terrified me. I feel so terrible for those parents and that sweet innocent little boy..so sad...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Kim Merryman
Date: 9/9/2016 10:29:00 PM
Thank you for my placement, Laura! I appreciate it!
Date: 6/18/2016 1:58:00 PM
Kim, this made me weep, such a sad, sad thing to happen, those poor heartbroken parents, how will they ever heal. You penned a meaningful tribute. ..
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/22/2016 5:09:00 PM
This was a very tragic event. Horrifying and heartbreaking. Thank you for reading, Constance.
Date: 6/17/2016 4:25:00 PM
Such a terrible tragedy - my heart goes out to his poor parents:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/17/2016 4:41:00 PM
Mine does too, Jan. Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 6/17/2016 6:44:00 AM
that is a truly horrifying thing that happened. Such suffering he must have endured. Orlando is a hot bed for tragedy this week. Good poem, Kim.
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Date: 6/17/2016 4:40:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. I can't imagine what his poor parents are going through.
Date: 6/17/2016 12:53:00 AM
I watched in tears as that story was announced on the news Kim. Your poem was a beautiful touching tribute to such a heart breaking happening. A tiny consulation is that they found his body whole. There are many families to pray for in Florida right now. Blessings, Connie 7
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Date: 6/17/2016 4:38:00 PM
It certainly seems like Florida, especially Orlando, is being bombarded by tragedy. Thank you for your comment, Connie.
Date: 6/16/2016 4:19:00 PM
OH MY GOODNESS! What a horrible thing to have happen. I was born and raised in Florida and raised around the swamp lands. We knew learned at an early age to stick close to momma and daddy and to watch out for snakes and gators. That poor family. Great write and I'm sure they appreciate the lovely tribute. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/17/2016 4:32:00 PM
Judy, you are right. Most Floridians know to be careful, but these folks were from Nebraska. This was a most horrifying event. Thank you for stopping by.
Date: 6/15/2016 10:31:00 PM
It is such a terrible tragedy, and my heart goes out to the family. Touching poem Kim.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/17/2016 4:29:00 PM
Thank you, Mark. It was a horrific tragedy!

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