Trembles and Thrills

TREMBLES and THRILLS Was it love that spelled when I caught a glimpse of him on a starless night? Flame of passion rise Frozen hearts thawed, now aflame When loving captures Hugging limbs of two entwined They, naked or clothed Their entranced display absorbed Bare or askew, loves spoken Of sweet spring night dream, a bed of blooms reach their peak, virginal petals under a bank of dawn clouds tickled, blushes rosy reds... Falling into wake, I stirred to feel summer breaths stroking my cold cheeks. I ask myself, was the dream I have, instantly came true? Minutes passed, we stood warm drops from sudden showers rolled upon our curves as heat surfaces from us; our bodies dancing again... Breaking morning rules we lie spooned for two more hours heartbeats sang refrains. Our song broken by soft rain, we dressed to begin our day. ________________________________________ 9:52 pm, November 01, 2015

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Date: 12/12/2015 1:35:00 AM
This is a sensual poem. You can write them as well. Also, I see you have sponsored on this theme. Thank you for your visit to my collab poem.
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Date: 12/11/2015 3:38:00 PM
Zaayyuum. DAs gud c:
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Date: 12/7/2015 3:01:00 AM
Olive exceptional write. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:19:00 PM
Wow Olive a great romantic write.. Congrats on big win!~
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:28:00 PM
Wonderful write,Olive, "Trembles and Thrills"! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:13:00 PM
Olive, <3 Congratulations on your wonderful ROMANTIC win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my romantic blog "No Barriers." Help celebrate each and every win by dropping by with a nice and sweet congratulations. You never know, you might want to pick out a few titles to read and enjoy. Pass the encouragement, every smile counts. Forever & Ever **SKAT**
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Date: 12/6/2015 5:12:00 PM
Olive, WOW,, breathtaking and romantic... SKAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 12/11/2015 2:26:00 AM
thanks much Skat.. =`)
Date: 11/11/2015 12:08:00 PM
Love this collab of ours Olive. Soon we'll be writing them together just like on holidays. But this time it'll be for a longer holiday. Love this like I love you, loads ;-) hugs // James // xxxx
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:23:00 PM
our holidays are forever James, weeeee!! love this collab too.. =`) thanks for taunting me, I never thought that I can write as much in this form.. =`) thanks for your guidance.. =`)~Olive Eloisa
Date: 11/4/2015 4:28:00 PM
Another seamless collaboration from two poets who read each others minds so well! Love and passion heat up the night; alas a new day and the call of duty also need attention:) // paul
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:26:00 AM
Paul thanks lot for the generous comment.. =`) I don't write tanka as much, James is better than me writing in this form.. He taunted me and I bit his taunt.. =`) hehehe hugs!~Olive Eloisa
Date: 11/3/2015 6:44:00 PM
GREAT WRITE! You guys TOGETHER, never fail to deliver superb poetry ..A7
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Date: 11/9/2015 2:23:00 AM
thanks much Robert.. I so appreciate your comment. =`)
Date: 11/3/2015 9:28:00 AM
Sweet loving poem. What beautiful way to wake up in the morning.
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Date: 11/5/2015 9:25:00 AM
thanks much James.. =`)~OLive ELoisa =`)
Date: 11/2/2015 7:57:00 PM
Very lovely you two! I see what you want for your contest, I am just not sure I can deliver. I will try.
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Date: 11/4/2015 9:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie.. i apprciate your lovely comment.. =`)
Date: 11/1/2015 2:58:00 PM
Very beautiful feelings portrayed here in your series of tanka, Olive. Your contest sounds interesting. Just had to come and check out the poem you wrote with this subject's title! Great job, you two.
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Date: 11/3/2015 11:35:00 PM
Hi Andie, this i think my second or third try in this form, but I do like this form but I don't use it much... =`) just with the challenge of James so I bite it and so this poem.. =`)
Date: 11/1/2015 1:38:00 PM
Olive, so beautifully penned, a lovely 7 and I want to thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your All That Melts Contest, I am honored ~
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Date: 11/2/2015 6:01:00 AM
Your welcome COnstance, I enjoyed reading, your entry.. =`)
Date: 11/1/2015 1:04:00 PM
Interesting topic to use in the Tanka form..Great collaboration..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara
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Date: 11/1/2015 7:55:00 PM
Sara, I really am apt to tricky challenging taunts in thinking and yes this one is interesting.. =`) You are welcome..! We are very pleased that you entered your poem!!!!=`)
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