Trees

I've done things, to not be broken.
Successful till now.
Pruned entire branches
from my tree of life.
Had these others bent back
by the callous, thoughtless passerby.
Looked away for a moment from the bloom,
now nothing but empty sticks remain.
Dead thought leaves litter the earth
all around my life.

Ramose still
but newly cleaved by lightning
into two sovereign things.
At last the realization dawns
That what I called roots
was the real tree.
That what I called tree
were roots flailing about wildly
up in the air for all to see.
 
And here
immersed deep in this neutral ground
I can feel the presence of others.
Same weary mistake as me.
Below the level of the earth,
inverted.
Waiting for Spring.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Gorelick Avatar
July 2, 2011 at 12:35 PM
Hello to you..soup mail..this is lovely. BG
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June 8, 2011 at 7:22 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Clifford. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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June 8, 2011 at 3:15 PM
Thank you for the lovely comment! Yes I am just now looking around some. There is so much here! It will be a long path of discovery. I do appreciate your welcome.
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2011 at 2:23 PM
Nicely worded verse with good expressions, Clifford
Dehaven Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:11 PM
Thank you very much, I appreciate your commenting.
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June 7, 2011 at 1:53 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative poetry on trees... enjoy the site as u share words with luv.. check out our free contests..too..luv..
Dehaven Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Thank you for making me welcome, I surely do appreciate it!
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