Get Your Premium Membership

Tree

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Eve Roper.


Surrounded by painted pale blue heaven, as I stand on grass all fresh and verdant green, the sun rays warms me. Toying breeze fans and lifts my leaves and fall beneath my shade as I reflect back on the past with changing of the seasons as I grow. Birds, squirrels, and other small creatures have come and gone. Children with joyous laughter climbed my limbs and have broken a few. Couples walked side by side holding hands and would sit on a blanket beneath my shade. Deeply rooted, waiting for another hundred years. 8/25/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/29/2017 5:04:00 PM
A wonderful personification poem about a beautiful tree in lovely reverie. Enjoyed! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 10:41:00 PM
So lovely Eve, very well written!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 8:36:00 PM
Great poem, Eve. I love it! Janice
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 8:31:00 PM
Wow, Eve, this is one of your best poems that I have read! I loved reading this awesome Personification this evening my friend! You have written such a delightful piece, I am impressed by the splendor of this incredible poem, Great Work!!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 7:59:00 PM
I LOVE how you did your poem, Eve. One of my favorites I have seen in this contest.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 4:23:00 PM
Most marvelous personification and the shape resembles a tree and its branches:-) hugs jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 4:05:00 PM
Love the tribute to the tree--best wishes for a win Eve!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 3:55:00 PM
Beautiful Eve, good luck :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/19/2017 3:53:00 PM
Love this so much. Best of luck in the contest x
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things